My hometown

I come from Hanoi. It is a big city, and also the capital of Vietnam. Hanoi is famous for rich and historic culture. You can see some ancient towns or old pagodas and temples easily. When you travel to Hanoi, you cannot try the Hanoi cuisine. The traditional dishes are very awesome, so it is so shame if you don't eat food in Hanoi. Beside the old and ancient towns, pagodas and temples, Hanoi has a lot of skycrapers, cinema, park, exciting entertainment services, and etc. Hanoi is a wonderful place you should travel in your holiday.
( Note: The (no need the) Vietnamese girls are very beautiful and hospitable, especially the girls(the ones) from Hanoi. If you want to make a friend with one of the Hanoi girl( make firend with a girl from hanoi), you can add me. Thank you so much if( for adding me) you add friend with me. I really want to talk (to) an English speaker to improve my English ^.^)

Since the lady corrected most of your mistakes, there are still some mistakes from the note that hasnt been corrected..