Application letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m an undergraduate student.I’m writing this letter to inquire about the possibility of finding a child who is in need of financial help.

Listed below are the basic requirements.The child<s> is</s> loves to study <s>who</s> and has just starting schooling in a remote area.My plan is to offer tuition fee every year until he/she graduates.Likewise,I will provide him/her life aid such as 100 yuan living expenses each month.I would like to give money directly to her/his family’s account.

My thanks to you for your help. <s>are beyond words</s> (Not really necessary, but you can say: Many thanks for your help, it is beyond words). I’m looking forward to your reply.<s>Be in touch</s>. (Not needed, you already said that you were looking forward to their reply)

Sincerely,

Li Ming

My holiday

My holiday was in Crimea, Alushta. I don't remember if it was in 2017 or 2018. but I think, it was my the best vacation! I was first on the Black sea.

I went in Crimea ( Alushta) with my university friends. I learned a very good (a lot or I learned well, I am not sure what you want to say here) and my <s>an</s> university paid for my holiday.

I live in Togliatti. Alushta is very far away. We went about 28-30 hours. We were really get tireds (We were really tired or We really got tired). We went on the bus. We were on the road and we sang<s>s</s> and ate. My mate sang too, but she was a terrible singer. I <s>was</s> got a headache.

We lived in Alushta's, sanatorium, "Honey" . I lived with Sveta. She learned at the department of "Design". She's a little shy. We loved <s>in</s> the little room.

I was in Crimea <s>on </s> for 14 days. I was tired of my holiday!

It was warm and sunny, and the weather was good.

The Sanatorium was <s>a lot of on </s> close or near the sea. I <s>many</s> swam a lot in the sea, we walked on a mountain, a locks and a winery. <s>A</s> The wine was delicious. I bought the wine for my friends and parents. It was my first time diving. It was incredible. The sea was blue and clean. I can see a fish<s>s</s>, <s>a</s> seaweeds, <s>a</s> stones, jellyfish, and crabs. I fell in love with diving and the sea.

Speakout B2, Unit 1.1 Ex 1

Do you think it’s easier to live with family, friends or on your own?

If I had to choose among these options, I would prefer to live on my own. First of all, because I am an introverted person who can recuperate energy being in solitude. When I am exhausted <s>by </s>(because of) a hard working day, all I need is to be left alone. Secondly, my hobbies require at least a separate room, that is to say, having a speaking practice session in (the) presence of other people makes me feel uncomfortable. And even if I felt comfortable, I would not dare to disturb someone. Living with family has its pros and cons. On one hand you always have someone to help you, and this help and support will always be unconditional. On the other hand living with family implies more responsibility not only for your own actions. Besides, you must be able to accept a compromise and take into account interests and opinions of all your family members. The advantages of living with friends may only exist on condition that they respect your limits. In this case you can live according your rules and enjoy a good company.

<em style="color: rgb(0, 71, 178);">This was written well, good job. </em>