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    August 15, 2021
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    I would like to improve my writing skills, but at the moment I <s>did not</s> cannot decide which topic I should write about <s>actually</s> so I'm just writing <s>just</s> what I'm thinking now. <s>and</s> I hope that people who are more competent in English correct me <s>it</s>. I'm writing without any dictionary or <s>and </s>translation software and turned off autocorrection <s>just now </s>so there will be many more mistakes <s>mistakes will be much more </s>)). I still haven't decided what to write. <s>but what to write I did not decide yet)</s> Can you give me some ideas? I will be glad to get <s>any</s> ideas and will try to write about them topic by topic.

    Notes:
    When you use the word "it" as a pronoun, make sure it is actually referring to a previous noun. I'm not sure it's completely necessary, but I changed "it" to "me" because it's not clear which noun "it" would refer to ("topic"? "writing skills"?).
    Be careful with run-on sentences. Do not use too many ands or ors.
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    January 27, 2020
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    Une description de moi Je suis née le 30 août 1998 à Boston aux Etats-Unis. Je pratique le volley et la course à pied. J'aime les films indépendants, les livres, le jazz et le français. Mes aliments préférés sont la pâte et le fromage. Je m'intéresse aux droits de l'homme et à la condition féminine.
    January 27, 2020
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    230 - Headache

    Headaches <s>is</s> are something terrible<s>, which </s>that I <s>would</s> always like to avoid. The problem is that it is sometimes <s>is</s> impossible. If you work for <s>7 o 8 </s> seven or eight hours in a row in front of a computer, then you can at least expect a quite severe headache that lasts two or three hours <s>of 2 or 3 hours long</s>. It's normal: the inevitable <s>effect</s> outcome of a stressful day. This is why I will go to sleep after the publication of this notebook entry. I need to rest. Today is an important day.
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    January 16, 2020
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    L'hiver Il a neigé aujourd'hui. L'ouate ne suffise pas à me protège. C'est comme le froid arrête mon élan, effiloche mes émotions, ralentit mon pouls. J'ai eu beau m'animer, mais les flocons de neige m'ont couvert. Printemps ! Ou es-tu ?
    January 15, 2020
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    I am suffering from hangover.

    ‎I still feel sick because I drank over my limit 2 days ago with my boss while we had dinner.
    I think it's good to drink in moderation.
    I've decided to start leaning <s>again</s> 'Data Science' again. <s>that </s>I quit last month.
    <s>It's</s> The course is <s>an</s> 8 months <s>length course</s> long, but it seems <s>thst</s> that I could finish it <s>whitin</s> within 5 months if I do my best.
    I've got to get some shut eye. I feel tired.

    Notes:
    In formal writing, you should spell out small numbers (one, two three, etc.) and avoid conjunctions (I have, it is) - In this piece they are fine because it is informal.
    When you use the word "it", make sure it is referring to a noun you have already defined
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    January 15, 2020
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    In the winter..

    Its snowing whole day.The sky's dull and overcast .There is not the sun for three weeks.
    All roads are covered with snow.People can not clean its in time,until begining of work day..so in the city there are a lot of traffic jam.But all of it is a problem for adults.Children are happy with snow. There are huge snowdifts around.In child fantasy it may сhange in people,refuge,ball,fortress


    Note: be careful with punctuation. Periods, commas, and other punctuation should be followed with one space. Also, watch your tenses. Look up how to use "present tense" and "past tense".


    Rewritten with corrections:

    It has been snowing for the whole day. The sky is dull and overcast. There has not been sun for three weeks.

    All roads were covered with snow. People could not clear the snow by the beginning of the work day, so in the city there is a heavy traffic jam. But this problem is only an issue for adults. Children are happy with the snow. There are huge snowdrifts around. Children are fantasizing about making it into snowmen, snowballs, and fortresses.

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    December 12, 2018
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