In the winter.. Its snowing whole day.The sky's dull and overcast .There is not the sun for three weeks. All roads are covered with snow.People can not clean its in time,until begining of work day..so

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In the winter.. Its snowing whole day.The sky's dull and overcast .There is not the sun for three weeks. All roads are covered with snow.People can not clean its in time,until begining of work day..so in the city there are a lot of traffic jam.But all of it is a problem for adults.Children are happy with snow. There are huge snowdifts around.In child fantasy it may сhange in people,refuge,ball,fortress

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In the winter

It is snowing the whole day.The sky is dull and overcast.There has been no the sun for three weeks (1).
All the roads are covered with snow. People do not manage to remove / plow (2) its on time, until the beginning of the workday, so the traffic is bad in the city. But all this is a problem only for adults. Children are happy with the snow. There are huge piles of snow all around. In children's imagination they may turn into people, some refuge, balls, or a fortress.

1) period of time ("for") - Present Perfect

2) чистить снег - to remove / plow the snow

3) pile of snow - сугроб, куча снега; snowdrift - снежный намёт, снежный занос

4) fantasy - выдумка, мечта; фэнтези; https://dictionary.cambridge.org/ru/словарь/английский/fantasy; imagination - воображение, представление

In the winter..

Its snowing whole day.The sky's dull and overcast .There is not the sun for three weeks.
All roads are covered with snow.People can not clean its in time,until begining of work day..so in the city there are a lot of traffic jam.But all of it is a problem for adults.Children are happy with snow. There are huge snowdifts around.In child fantasy it may сhange in people,refuge,ball,fortress

Note: be careful with punctuation. Periods, commas, and other punctuation should be followed with one space. Also, watch your tenses. Look up how to use "present tense" and "past tense".

Rewritten with corrections:

It has been snowing for the whole day. The sky is dull and overcast. There has not been sun for three weeks.

All roads were covered with snow. People could not clear the snow by the beginning of the work day, so in the city there is a heavy traffic jam. But this problem is only an issue for adults. Children are happy with the snow. There are huge snowdrifts around. Children are fantasizing about making it into snowmen, snowballs, and fortresses.

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