Search from various English teachers...
Profile
Halo, nama saya Louis! Saya belajar bahasa Indonesia dan umur dua puluh tahun. Jangan ragu untuk kirim pesan kalau anda mau belajar bahasa Inggris. Saya akan membantu anda kalau anda membantu saya. :))
Learning
Indonesian
Language Skills
EnglishNative
Lesson Feedback
Lesson history
 Last monthLast 3 monthsAll time
Completed lessons007
Attendance rate100%100%100%
Teacher reviews
Dindin MK
Indonesian
Nov 29, 2019
Pertemuan ketiga dengan Louis. Dia belajar tentang materi afiksasi. Imbuhan me-, ber-, pe-, per-, lalu akhiran -an, -kan. Dia tipe siswa yang antusias dan tahu tujuan belajar, sehingga sangat membantu saya sebagai pengajar ketika memberikan berbagai contoh yang relevan. :)
Dindin MK
Indonesian
Nov 20, 2019
Pertemuan kedua dengan Louis, saya rasa dia sudah mulai semakin baik Bahasa Indonesianya. Di pertemuan ini saya hanya menemukan satu pegucapan yang perlu dilatih, yaitu bunyi 'e' seperti pada kata 'kemana' atau 'berapa'. Selain itu, tinggal seeing latihan saja. Mantap bro! :)
Dindin MK
Indonesian
Nov 9, 2019
Louis perlu latihan lebih sering lagi, karena mungkin sudah terlalu lama Bahasa Indonesia dia tidak digunakan jadi kadang masih ragu ketika berbicara. Tetapi semangatnya untuk bisa begitu besar, saya yakin dia akan sukses menguasai bahasa Indonesia dengan lancar. 👍👍
Activities
  • Corrected
    Carmen Miranda, the Brazilian Bombshell

    Carmen Miranda lived ahead of her time. When the world was facing the horrors of the war, Carmen brought to the people some relief and joy with her unique way of entertaining the public. She sang, danced and acted with a very particular style. Colorful clothes, big necklaces, bracelets and her famous fruit hat.

    When asked about the outfit, she <s>told </s>said that it was inspired by the Brazilian women from Bahia, who carried baskets <s>in</s> on their heads to <s>sold </s>sell fruits.

    Despite being born in Portugal, she came to Brazil before she <s>completed</s> was two years old and since then was very engaged <s>to the </s>with Brazilian culture and <s>successefully</s> successfully shared it with the world.

    ----

    Only small mistakes! This is very good, and makes sense even with the mistakes. The biggest mistake is probably your use of 'completed', which is never used in English in this context. Also, the phrase "engaged to" is only really used in the sense "planned to be marriage to", so sounds jarring here.

    Good luck :)
    0 voted
    January 2, 2020
    1
  • Corrected
    "It has been relatively easy to follow southwards the wake left by this oil slick and observe its effects on sand and sea creatures."

    This sentence is fine grammatically but maybe a bit clunky, you should have the directional adverb 'southwards' after the object. e.g. "follow the wake southwards".

    Also, when you say "sand and sea creatures" I'm not sure if you're trying to say "sand creatures and sea creatures", or if you're really interested in how the oil is effecting the sand itself. At any rate, we don't really say 'sand creatures' in English, so if that is what you're trying to say, you should find a different way to say it.

    I'd write this:

    "It has been relatively easy to follow the oil slick's wake southwards and observe its effect on the environment and wildlife."

    ---

    "American *satellites* were used for that but found no trace. The oil slick seems to trick *satellites*."

    Be careful, satellite not "satelite" in English! Also, no trace of what? "found no trace *of it*"!

    ---

    "Based on photos made available by Europeans, researchers at the University of Bahia saw what could be a 22-square-kilometer new oil slick off the Bahia coast. This possibility was ruled out."

    Change the order of ‘new’ and ’22-square-kilometer’. Adjectives have a natural order, and normally size adjectives come before adjectives about the quality of it. So, it should be “new 22-square-kilometer oil slick”.

    Also, these two sentences are related. One common problem people have when they translate is they miss out on all the small words that link sentences together. In this case, I would write:

    “However, this possibility was ruled out.”

    ---

    “The oil was thought to *have* spread all over the surface.”

    Spelling!
    0 voted
    January 2, 2020
    2
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    January 2, 2020
    0
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    January 2, 2020
    0
  • Answered
    It doesn't sound like a natural sentence so its meaning is not clear. I think it would mean "why do you refuse to go to a normal college?"
    0 voted
    December 4, 2019
    0
  • Answered
    'therethrough' I have never heard used. Unlike Gary I don't think 'withal' is weird. I can see why you might find these words charming, and they definitely have their use in writing, but in speech they would never ever be used.
    0 voted
    December 4, 2019
    0
  • Corrected
    So far I have seen the first 5 episodes.

    I'm looking forward to watching all episodes.
    0 voted
    November 19, 2019
    0