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Carmen Miranda, the Brazilian Bombshell Carmen Miranda lived ahead of her time. When the world was facing the horrors of the war, Carmen brought to the people some relief and joy with her unique way of entertain the public. She sang, danced and acted with a very particular style. Colorful clothes, big necklaces, bracelets and the famous fruit hat. When asked about the outfit, she told that was inspired by the Brazilian women from Bahia, who carried baskets in their heads to sold fruits. Despite being born in Portugal, she came to Brazil before she completed two years old and since then was very engaged to the Brazilian culture and successefully shared it with the world.

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Carmen Miranda, the Brazilian Bombshell

Carmen Miranda lived ahead of her time. When the world was facing the horrors of the war, Carmen brought to the people some relief and joy with her unique way of entertaining the public. She sang, danced and acted with a very particular style. Colorful clothes, big necklaces, bracelets and her famous fruit hat.

When asked about the outfit, she told said that it was inspired by the Brazilian women from Bahia, who carried baskets in on their heads to sold sell fruits.

Despite being born in Portugal, she came to Brazil before she completed was two years old and since then was very engaged to the with Brazilian culture and successefully successfully shared it with the world.

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Only small mistakes! This is very good, and makes sense even with the mistakes. The biggest mistake is probably your use of 'completed', which is never used in English in this context. Also, the phrase "engaged to" is only really used in the sense "planned to be marriage to", so sounds jarring here.

Good luck :)
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