Difficulties in English

I have a problem with my progress in English. I read books, see movies, and listen to audio, but I have difficulties with expressing my thoughts. I can understand text or audio information, but can’t talk. To solve this problem, someone tell  told me to try writing a diary in English. I think it’s reasonable. I understand text because I read books. Same with audio. Hopefully this instrument will help me to improve.

Good job! I think that writing in English will help you to improve your ability to express your thoughts in English because when you write, you have time to think about how to express something in a different language, and this will help when you try to express yourself by speaking. Keep it up! :)

Is earning money the only good reason for working?

Of course it is not. Even though there are people who work because they need the money, there are many others who work because they like doing what they do.

First of all, working is a great option for training and studies studying because you gain experience. It's pretty common for students to take jobs without getting paid or with low salaries because they need to have experience to be taken on (in a later job or career). Otherwise, they won't get the job. Also, you learn how to do the things you want to learn and like in a better way.

Secondly, having colleagues is good but it's also complicated. On one hand, colleagues can be really mean and annoying. You don't want to work with them but you have to. On the other hand, you can meet really nice people. You can make good friends and talk about anything while working, or you can go out for a drink after a long and tiring day after work, etc. Having a good relationship with the people you work with makes things easier and you find yourself wanting to go to work the next day.

Finally, there are many people who really like what they do and they enjoy helping other people and passing on their skills to them. For example, elderly people who are retired and can stay at home but who choose to go to work anyways, or people who don't get paid at all or have a very low salary, choose to keep doing what they do just because they want to.

Good job! Keep up the good work! :)

Whether The Rules And Laws Is are Essencial Essential

The society is based on rules and laws that regulated individuals' behaviours. Although strict rules and laws are helpful to control crime commitment, I would argue that the rules and laws could be too strict to restrict individuals and industries.
The rules and laws regulated individuals' behaviours in almost every aspect of life. The traffic rules prevent plenty of accidents from occurring, for instance, which save people's life lives in another way. Also, some laws such as the restriction on guns protect people from being hurt by terrorists and some offenders. If there is were no rules or laws, the traffic jams, gun shootings, as well as some hurting injuries would occur, which certainly brought individuals into trouble. (it is unclear to me what you were trying to say here?)
The rules and laws also provide steady growth of the economy. Laws that prompt patents supported rapid growth of some state-of-the-art industries to grow rapidly. For example, China has enforced a law that declined the tax on artificial intelligence, which boosted Chinese artificial intelligence. If there is was no law to protect the new industry, the development of artificial intelligence in China would still be at a sluggish pace.
In my view, the rules and laws benefit individuals and society to some extent. However, it brought brings many strict disciplines that restrict individuals and the economy. The laws that prevent people from accessing foreign websites contributed to the limitation of domestic academy to develop, since many websites such as Google Scholar, where posted countless extraordinary research papers which is are available to the users. In the mMeanwhile, the import restriction raised the problem that people are unable to purchase foreign goods, which may cause some domestic producers to have a monopoly.
To summarise, it is rational to argue that the rules and laws regulate individuals' behaviours. However, if the government wants to not only stimulate individuals' creativity, but also to avoid monopoly of some companies, it should loosen the restrictions and support more.

[This is my 1st IELTS wrting practice, I would appreciate it if you could give a hand to me to make some corrections.] :)

Good job! One suggestion is that when you are talking about the laws, you should use the present tense because the laws are currently in existence.