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    Mon jour de remise des diplômes Vendredi, j'ai reçu mon diplôme. Maintenant, j'ai un master en mathematiques. Ce jour-là était agréable, bien que la cérémone était longue et chaud --- j'ai dû applaudir pour les 470 autres diplômés, et plus nous avons applaudi, plus la salle s'est remplie avec la chaleur et la sueur. Après ça, mes collègues et moi avons bavardé, et nos professurs nous ont souhaité bonne chance. Ma famille a assisté, y compris mes parents, ma femme, et ma soeur et ton copain. Et ce soir-là, nous avons célébré avec un repas de mon restaurant préféré. Pour l'intant, la peine est terminée -- en octobre, ça va reprendre pour le doctorat!
    July 23, 2019
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    film watching II

    More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
    PART I(https://www.italki.com/notebook/5180790/entry/984722)

    Another reason why people spend more time watching movies concerns the convenience of watching a film. Thanks to the development of modern telecommunications, it is available possible to watch movies online. People do not have to waste time to travel travelling to the nearby cinema or endure enduring the noise of caused by other viewers based on the fact that many  people eating popcorns or talking during screening time. They can use the computer or projector to watch films at home, lying alone at a on the coach or sharing a good time with friends or family.

    In my opinion, the increasing popularity of film watching not only benefits the audience but also incentivises the film industry to thrive and prosper. Average people can learn a lot from different kinds of movies. For example, many documentary films tell a historical event interestingly, and foreign films can relieve stereotypes among different nations. In addition, many filmmakers and film producers can make money from it, and therefore have more budget to cast a film with higher aesthetics or artistic value, which may leave a valuable heritage to future generations.

    In conclusion, I believe people’s choice of watching movies are is influenced by advertisements and the development of modern telecommunications. This development has many merits because it not only provides an important source of information for the audience but also encourages the film producers to create more masterpieces if they gain support from a larger group of the audience.


    Well done!

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    March 27, 2019
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    film watching part I

    More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

    Watching movies has become one of the most popular pastimes among both city dwellers and residents in rural areas. I believe it is the intensive promotion and the convenience of watching a film that have attributed contributed to the increasing number of film buffs, and both the individual consumer and the film producer benefit from the development of the film industry.

    A major factor of the popularity of film watching is its promotion of film-watching through the mass media (avoid repetition). Many film companies often invest a huge amount of money in launching campaigns for promoting their recently released films (the sentence is correct but "many" and "often" make the sentence weaker, which is bad for an essay promoting your views). For example, they pay for news reporters and bid for TV commercials, internet pop-up advertisements as well as billboards on the expressway. People are exposed to the information and cannot resist the temptation of advertisements, ending up with paying the tickets for those blockbusters.

    the rest of the essay is uploaded in another post
    (https://www.italki.com/notebook/5180790/entry/984723)
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    March 27, 2019
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    La marche de protestation Samedi, j'ai participé à la marche de protestation contre Brexit. Je suis allé avec ma femme, ma soeur, et sa petit ami. La marche était énorme, et les gens était agréable et de bonne humeur. Je m'ai sentir bien de faire partie de l'histoire. Mon panneau dit « Parliament: Take Back Control » -- c'est une référence à le slogan de la campagne pour le sortie de l’Union européenne. Pour moi, la lutte de rester dans l'Union européenne est une lutte pour mes valeurs du cosmopolitanisme et de la coopération. Les nationalistes ne doivent pas gagner !
    March 26, 2019
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    Mon projet Finalement, je crois que je suis près de finir mon projet pour mon master. Les idées sont là. Maintenant, il y a seulement les détails à régler. C'est un projet de mathematique, concernant les relations quadratiques des Grassmanniennes. Ça fait du bien de voir la fin est proche. Après ça, je dois préparer une présentation que explique les idées principales. Mais, c'est assez agréable. J'aime parler, c'est vrai.
    March 11, 2019
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    L'huile dans mes cheveux Aujourd'hui, je fais majoritairement mes devoirs. C'est au sujet de la géométrie algébrique, mais en fait, il n'y a pas de géométrie, il y a seulement d'algèbre ennuyeuse. Maintenent, je fais une pause, et ma femme applique de l'huile d'olive dans mes cheveux, pour l'hydrater. C'est agréable, mais ce me gratte un peu. Aprés mes devoirs, je vais faire à manger avec ma femme. Merci pour lire mon premier journal.
    February 3, 2019
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    Several hours without the internet

    The internet was out of service this morning due to some technical reasons and made all the electronic devices stop working. I couldn't watch TV, and I didn't know what I could do with my phone or computer considering the situation. All I could do was lie there wondering about the ultimate question of life. Who am I? Where am I? Why I am here? Actually, there is some data stored on my computer and I can continue with my work. But it seems that without the connection, I just lost the power to accomplish this work.
    This is an intereting phenomenon. I didn't realise I rely on the internet so much. I have seen some experiments about how a person can live without any electronic devices. Most of the volunteers became anxious or upset for several hours or days. I used to think I could endure for a whole day. A breakdown after just few hours is not something I ever expected. So maybe I should learn to put down the phone and computers and enjoy the real life.
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    February 3, 2019
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