Several hours without the internet
The internet was out of service this morning due to some techneque reasons and made all the electronic devices paralysed. I couldn't watch TV, and I didn't know what I can do with my phone or computer considering the situation. All I can do was lying there and wondering the ultimate question of life. Who am I? Where am I? Why I am here? Actually, there is some data storing on my computer and I can continue with my work. But it seems that without the connection, I just lost the power to accomplish these work.
This is an intereting phenomenone. I didn't realise I rely on the internet so much. I have seen some experiments about how a person can hold on without any electronic devices. Most of the volunteers became anxious or upset for some days or hours. I used to think I can endure for a whole day. A breakdown after just few hours is not somethin I have ever expected. So maybe I should learn to put down the phone and computers and learn to enjoy the real life.
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Several hours without the internet
The internet was out of service this morning due toThis is an interesting phenomenon
Sorry about the different coloured underlinings! Not sure what my computer is doing.
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Several hours without the internet
The internet was out of service this morning due to some techneque technical reasons and made paralysed all the electronic devices. I couldn't watch TV, and I didn't know what I can to do with my phone or computer considering the situation. All I can could do was lying there and wondering about the ultimate question of life. Who am I? Where am I? Why am I here? Actually, there is was some data storing on stored in my computer and I can could continue with my work. But it seems seemed (try to keep consistency in the times, if you are telling a story in the past, all sentences should be referring to the past) that without the connection, I just lost the power to accomplish these work.This is an intereting interesting phenomenone phenomenon. I didn't realise hadn't realised I rely on the internet so much (Better: I hadn't realised how much I rely on the Internet). I have seen some experiments about how a person can hold on without any electronic devices. Most of the volunteers became anxious or upset for (Did you mean after?) some days or hours. I used to think I can could endure for a whole day. A breakdown after just few hours is not somethin something I have had ever expected. So maybe I should learn to put down the phone and computers the computer and learn to enjoy the real life.
Awesome text! Really inspiring!
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Several hours without the internet
The internet was out of service this morning due to some technical reasons and made all the electronic devices stop working. I couldn't watch TV, and I didn't know what I could do with my phone or computer considering the situation. All I could do was lie there wondering about the ultimate question of life. Who am I? Where am I? Why I am here? Actually, there is some data stored on my computer and I can continue with my work. But it seems that without the connection, I just lost the power to accomplish this work.This is an intereting phenomenon. I didn't realise I rely on the internet so much. I have seen some experiments about how a person can live without any electronic devices. Most of the volunteers became anxious or upset for several hours or days. I used to think I could endure for a whole day. A breakdown after just few hours is not something I ever expected. So maybe I should learn to put down the phone and computers and enjoy the real life.
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