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    Holi! Here are my corrections for your writing. Let me know if you have any questions. :)[Image]
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    February 9, 2021
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    please , correct the answer

    Read the text below and choose the correct word for each space. For each question, mark the correct letter A, B, C or D. (20 POINTS)
    San Francisco
    San Francisco lies on the coast of northern California. The earliest Europeans to discover the (1)_____area________ were led by a Spanish explorer (2) __ who ________________ name was Gaspar de Portolá.
    He first saw it in 1769. Surprisingly, (3)___ although ___________ San Francisco Bay is a wonderful natural harbour, it was discovered by land (4) _____ instead _________________than by sea.
    In 1849, people (5) ___ arrived ______________in San Francisco in their thousands (6)__________ hoping _______________ to find gold. However, it was not the men looking for the gold that got rich. The richest people (7) _______ became __________their money from owning banks and law firms and they built themselves large houses on one of the hills. This was (8) _____ known ______________ as Nob Hill.
    Nowadays, tourists are (9) ______ attracted _____________________ to San Francisco because there they can see famous places like Chinatown and the Golden Gate Bridge. Many even (10)_______ travel ________________ the short boat trip to the island of Alcatraz to see the former prison.

    1. A area B part C space D position
    2. A who B whose C what D which
    3. A if B unless C although D despite
    4. A except B instead C apart D rather
    5. A reached B arrived C entered D approached
    6. A wondering B hoping C considering D depending
    7. A did B became C made D brought
    8. A told B called C named D known
    9. A interested B attracted C pleased D excited
    10. A take B spend C go D travel

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    Please review these questions, and try again! 
    You're doing great...just take another guess, and I will correct your answers again, and I can also explain the questions and answers, too. 
    :-) 

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    September 13, 2018
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    My Future Plan For Living

    A few weeks ago I started two new businesses in at the same times: One is a cleaning service and the other is a swimming team. In my w view, the swimming school will be more succsessful successful. After I had advertised my swimming lessons, I got received more calls in connection regarding with swimming lessons than with cleaning services. Last week I could only clean just two appartements apartments, but as for my swimming lessons, I had apply more than 18 students apply! Although the cleaning substances are more cheaper than the swimming pool's rental price, I think working on my own swimming school will be more profitable.
    Thanks for reading,and correcting.


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    Overall, great job Csaba! 
    :-)

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    September 13, 2018
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    Making-sentence practices Sentence-Making Practice 

    1.Retention
    The retention of energy energy retention is very important for athletes in a marathon.
    The images are helpful to the retention of information. (one could also say, "memory retention")
    2.Egalitarian
    Many famous, historical celebrities pursue an egalitarian society.
    3.Horde
    There are hordes of tourists on this beautiful beach during the summer holiday.
    4.Artery
    You need to do some emergency treatment of wounds if you cut your artery accidentally.
    5.Grift (Please check this word. Do you mean greed?)
    Grift make people become evil and crafty.
    6.Jostle
    Peoples jostled each other for buying in  during 'The Black Friday'.
    7. Casualty
    The casualties in this major accident has arisen to 300 peoples. ("People" is considered plural, so we need to "casualty" plural as well)

    8.Apropos
    The president made a presentation apropos of the trade war.
    9.peculiar
    When he arrived / came back to his house, he found noticed a peculiar smell and realized that the gas was leaking.(We don't really "find" smells...we notice them. Or, we just "smell" smells. :-) ) 

    10.Irreversible
    An injury of the meniscus is irreversible, so people should protect their knees during when playing basketball.

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    Dear Willson, 
    I've corrected your notebook entry. 

    Overall, great job! 
    I would recommend that you review singular and plural nouns, especially when using adjectives (because adjectives need to "agree" with the noun they describe). Also, "people" is plural and irregular, so we don't need to add and -s to the end of it. 
    I also recommend a quick review of definite vs indefinite articles...these are always tricky for nonnative speakers when writing in English! Lastly, please practice using the preposition, "during" more. Here's a quick link for a review: https://www.englishgrammar.org/prepositions-time/

    -Ryan


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    September 10, 2018
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    The BBC channel has not been broadcasted in our area for years. ago
    On another website, they suggested that it's possible to use.
    They suggest that it's possible to use it on another website. 


    Alternate grammar constructions: 

    The BBC isn't being broadcasted in our area. 

    The BBC isn't being broadcasted in our area, and it's been like this for years. 


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    September 10, 2018
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    Hello Ito,
    I corrected part of your notebook entry.
    I don't quite understand the underlined section, so I left this unedited.

    -Ryan

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    Small Goblins

    I lost a my pencil. I lost a my eraser. I lost a my key. No, it is not my fault. Surely, there surely are some small goblins.

    They are good at and like hiding some things of mine, and they like to do that. In addition Additionally, I can't don't notice when they are moving to their targets hiding spots and what they bring carry around with them. On the top of that, they also have the skill ability  to cut out erase of my memory of where I put them my things.

    I have some items to insects, so I can call them to get out of my house. But I don't have any cards to them. I have visited some libraries in order to find out a way to slay them at some times. Although I have found out the a way, it always slips from my mind by them.

    What should I do?


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    September 9, 2018
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    Õla Thiago, 
    Here is my correction on your notebook entry.
    -Ryan

    The Picture of Dorian Gray

    Recently, I saw a film called "The Picture of Dorian Gray", starred by Ben Barnes (is the same person that starred as Prince Caspian in "The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian").
    The history is about a younger man that fell in love for with his your own image, like the myth of Narcissus narcissus' myth, that He makes a pact to stay young forever while his painting gets older. Over time, Dorian is taken by selfishness and vanity, doing terrible things terrible, letting your the picture that reflects his soul, horrible. which horribly reflect his soul. 
    The genre of this film is drama. I really recommend this film because the history is very well built, in fact, it's based on the book of the written by Oscar Wild and it's a classic.

    (My book is the 1965 version*)
    Correct me, people
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    September 9, 2018
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    September 2, 2018
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    September 2, 2018
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