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    I'm back

    I realized the value of the internet during the last 2 weeks. I had some problems with the company that provides my connection, but now it's solved. I'm back to my studies. The most important New Year's resolution that I had is about my English. I just need it more than anything in my life. I love the feeling of reading something in another language that I spent so much time to learn. This year is the year. I'm gonna to talk it fluently until the end of the year. I'm gonna speak it fluently by the end of the year.

    I'd like to have your help, my friend who is reading my text. I'd like to count on your help to getreach my dream!

    I"d be very honored if I could to help you with somethinganything (maybe in your studies of Portuguese)


    Aside from those few corrections, your English is very good.

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    May 18, 2018
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  • Corrected

    phrasal verbs daily !

    1. Having a cup of coffee helps me perk up early in the morning

    2. I had to read it out because my teacher forced me to do so. "Read it out loud" would also work here.

    3. I don't want to talk it over with you. I'd rather talk it over with another person.

    4. Did you look through the documents that I asked you to do?

    5. I took up learning bahasa Indonesia a few years ago.

    6. I had to sitstay up last night for the important exam that will be todaythis afternoon.

    7. I didn't dash off to work. I got up early.

    8. Have you come up with any ideas for the project? If you were only asking about one idea, it would be "Have you come up with an idea for the project?"

    9. Could you heat it up for me?

    10. Okay, we need to wrap up today's meeting.


    Not bad!

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    May 18, 2018
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  • Corrected

    Passive

    The book was made in 1999.
    The pen is broken today.
    A lot of cars was stayed traffic jam at road.  A lot of cars were stuck in a traffic jam on the road.
    Phone is turned on every day. This needs a pronoun before "phone," like "The," "His/Her," or "My."
    Money was lost today.
    This board must be written full. I would probably write this as "This board must be written on fully" or even just "This board must be filled."
    The This/That bus might have been the emptiest.

    The wallet looks complete. It has been put filled with money.
    The wallet looked complete. It had been put filled with money.

    The bank is being opened at the moment.
    The bank was being opened before I come came.
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    May 17, 2018
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  • Corrected

    Conversation

    Situations

    Two colleagues meet by the water cooler in their office.

    (I made a scription as belows)

    A: Hi!

    B: Hi!

    A: How're you doing?

    B: Pretty good, thanks.

    A: Today is a lovely day, isn't it?

    B: yYeah, I feltfeel like going to go somewhere !

    I wish I finished my work right now. I wish my work was finished right now.

    Anyway, Ddo you have any plan in this Saturday? You could say "plans this Saturday," "plans for this Saturday," or "plans on Saturday."

    A: I don't have any plans. wWhy?

    B: Actually, Kate and I are going to have a lunch atin Kagurazaka.

    There's a restaurant wherethat Kate has been Iinterested in. So, Iif you would like, come and join us!

    A: Oh, really? Sounds nice!

    Kate has a good sense of choosing restaurants, so the restaurant dishes might be delicious! This makes sense, but it's a bit awkward. I would say something like, "Kate has good taste in restaurants, so the food is sure to be delicious!"

    B: I'll definitely be there.

    A: Ok! wWell, I'll send a message in detail later!

    B: Ok, thanks! bBye!

    A: bBye!


    Try and watch your punctuation and spacing. There should be no spaces between a period or exclamation point and the end of the sentence. There should be no space between a comma and the word that comes before it, but there's always a space between a comma and the word that comes after it. There's also always a space after a colon.

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    May 17, 2018
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  • Corrected

    letter-request

    Dear Mr. Smith,

    I am writing to ask for a fortnight work off off work from the 1st to the 15th of May. The change in word order is because you're asking for a fortnight of off-days from work. Fortnight also isn't used very much in my experience, but since you also give the dates it's okay.

    The reason for this leave is that I plan to use this two weeks to finish my master’s degree in computer science. As you know, I have focused on my course of computer science computer science course for one year, and now the obstacle between my dream and reality is a graduating essay. So I desperately need to use my annual leave to polish and finalize my essay.

    In terms of my job, I have spoken to my colleagues, and it seems that either Tom or Jerry would be best placed to cover my project commitments while I am away. I will leave detailed instruction on my desk. Moreover, I will continue to check my email box, and keep be remain online during the working time every day. As a result, no important tasks would be delayed.

    As long soon as a master’s degree is awarded to me, I will commence rebuilding our website immediately. What I had will have learned during the course of my master’s degree is valuable to improve the appearance of our company’s website. In addition, I plan to set up a network division as well. Both of these definitely will contribute a great deal of revenue to our annual aim indirectly.

    I hope my request dose does not cause you any inconvenience.

    Yours sincerely,


    Apart from those corrections, this is a pretty well-done formal letter!

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    May 17, 2018
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  • Corrected

    My house

    Hello. guys. Should be either "Hello, guys" or "Hello guys."
    I wrote something in English. pPlease read it and comment what I did wrong. Thank you!

    I moved into this house in 2014. So, Iit's been about 4 years.
    I've been pretty happy with living in this house for the most part.
    Although, I do wish it had more places to eat. You need the "s" since you're talking about more than one place.
    bBut that's what I get for living apart from the city, right? "Apart" is okay, but I would probably use something like "away from the city" or "outside the city" if you live really far from the city.


    Not too bad though! Try to watch your capitalization.

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    May 17, 2018
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    僕の手帳:第1話 こんにちは。僕の名前はダンヤルです。これは僕の最初の記入、だからとても短いです。今、時は後夜中。僕は寝てほうがよいです。明日、もっと書きます。
    May 16, 2018
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