My house

Hello. guys. Should be either "Hello, guys" or "Hello guys."
I wrote something in English. pPlease read it and comment what I did wrong. Thank you!

I moved into this house in 2014. So, Iit's been about 4 years.
I've been pretty happy with living in this house for the most part.
Although, I do wish it had more places to eat. You need the "s" since you're talking about more than one place.
bBut that's what I get for living apart from the city, right? "Apart" is okay, but I would probably use something like "away from the city" or "outside the city" if you live really far from the city.

Not too bad though! Try to watch your capitalization.

My house

Hello, guys.
I wrote something in English. Please read it and comment what I did wrong. Thank you!

I had moved in this house in 2014. So, It's been about 4 years.
I've been pretty happy with living in this house for the most part.
Although, I wish it would have more places for eating purpose.
But that's what I get for living outside of the city, right?