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    Go Shopping

    This afternoon, my daughter and I went to a department store which is next to the Taipei bus station. We ate Udon noodles and some deep fried food for lunch. The underground of the store is connected to the Taipei MRT station through an underground street. After lunch, we went shopping on the underground street. We saw many young people who wore costumes cosplaying as video game characters. Maybe some people take cosplay as nonsense, but I think it's really interesting. If I were a young man, I would cosplay too.


    > I would join the cosplay activity as they did. 
    The ending of this sentence isn't wrong, it just sounds unnatural. I provided a correction to something that sounds more natural in my opinion. 

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    May 12, 2018
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    Diary day2

    Tonight we celebrated Mother's Day at the Japanese restaurant Shi Ni Shan and we had a huge 20-inch birthday cake. It was a great night with my family.
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    May 12, 2018
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    My journal

    People often commute by bike or on foot. With the development of the economy, cars can be seen everywhere and many families have bought their own. Of course, the increase in cars makes transportation more convenient. People can travel by driving their own cars on the weekend. For a good salary, more and more people chose to work in a different city (like BeiJing or ShangHai) which is not too far from their home and drive back home on the weekends. However, in recent years, there have been too many cars on the road. Traffic jams are everywhere in rush hour. You can be stuck on roads annoyed and could have to wait an hour or even more. When asked for the cause of the problem, experts will give many reasons including narrow roads, rush hour and so on. I also find a reason: laziness. People depend on cars so much that they don’t want to get to work by bicycle or on foot anymore. Even if it's only a five-minute journey on foot, they will chose to commute by car. I know a man who always drives a car to the gym even though the fitness center is only hundreds of meters away. I really don’t understand. Why don’t you run or walk to the gym If you're trying to lose weight?
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    May 12, 2018
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