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HSIN-CHAN LEE (ANDY)
Diary day2 Tonight,we celebrated Mother's Day at a Japanese restaurant SHI NI SHAN and we have a huge 20-inch birthday cake. It was a great night with my family.

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Diary day2

Tonight we celebrated Mother's Day at the Japanese restaurant Shi Ni Shan and we had a huge 20-inch birthday cake. It was a great night with my family.
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Diary day2

Tonight, we celebrated Mother's Day at a Japanese restaurant "shi ni shan".  We had a huge 20-inch birthday cake. That was a great night with my family.


we celebrated -- we had      both verbs should be in the same tense.  I am using the past tense here.

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