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    Health

    I think, sport and health food are very important for everyone. Do you want to keep in fit? You need a few simple rules everyday. We have a mobile (I am not sure what do you wanna express) way of life.

    I can't practice my speaking I'm worried for that.

    I need to learn English because I want to travel

    Then try to speak out is very important
    I'll be happy to receive your comments or advice of how improve my English.

    If you wanna practice oral English with a Network friend, feel free to contact me, I might be avaliable at night :)

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    If you just wanna write the article correctly, this will be OK enough:

    你会游泳吗？

    小的时候，我很喜欢游泳。
    我经常跟爸爸一起去游泳池。
    我家离游泳池很近。
    如今，我虽然不游泳了，但还会，只是游得不好。
    我现在更喜欢去健身房或者跑步。


    But if you wanna discrible those things like a native speaker, you`d better say:

     你会游泳吗？

    小的时候，我很喜欢游泳。
    游泳池离我家很近，我经常跟爸爸一起去游泳池。
    如今，我虽然不游了，但还是会的，只是游得不好。
    比起游泳，我现在更喜欢去健身房或者跑步。



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