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Hola! Mi nombre es Rida y soy una estudiante de Canada. Quiero mejorar mi español. Puedo ayudarte con inglés y hindi.
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    Essay Please Share Your Feedback, Advantages And Disadvantages Of Using Robots.

    This essay compares the advantages and disadvantages of using robots.

    Although some people are not in favour of creating robots, I personally encourage everyone to open their minds to the idea of robots and to try to see them as a conventional tool or as a new technology that we can afford nowadays. In the next couple of paragraphs, I am going to explain why I think we should use robots in our daily lives.

    Firstly, robots can complete hazardous tasks better and more easily than humans. Secondly, robots can start new services with important features that can change completely our lives.

    A robot can do dangerous work in a situation in which a terrorist plants a bomb. In that case, a robot can help and change the situation. Additionally, we can settle new worlds in the universe, such as Mars, by sending robots to land and make explorations to find out if it is safe and secure. However, robots may make a decision and that can be dangerous for the humanity because we may lose the control of the situation.

    Today, new services have begun to use robots that are able to make a call for booking a table in your favourite restaurant, make an appointment at the barber, the sky is the limit. They inclusive are capable of driving you to your house or drive on the way of our house or to be an adept and or to drive the trucks for long distances with important products for our company. Another use of robots that nowadays are taking more importance is perhaps as a therapists on applications on smartphone applications because they can make cheer up his owner when he is sad. On the other hand, robots can become spies in our lives and make our private information public on the web.

    To sum it up, we need to trust in the robots and just take care that not to share all our information until we are sure of our privacy.


    Buen trabajo, Luis! Espero que mis correcciones sean útiles.

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    Mi película favorita - 14 de mayo Mi película favorita de Hollywood es There Will be Blood. Es sobre un hombre llamado Daniel Plainview y su hijo HW. Plainview se hace rico con el comercio de petróleo, pero un sacerdote llamado Eli Sunday comienza una disputa con Plainview. La película es sobre su disputa, pero es también sobre Plainview, quien es un hombre muy misterioso. Me encanta esta película porque cada escena es perfecta y los actores son increíbles (especialmente Daniel Day-Lewis, como siempre). ¿Cuál es tu película favorita?
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    Hollywood filmmakers believe audiences always want a happy ending

    It’s true that filmmakers seem to believe that people can’t seem to bear a bad ending. In my opinion, this view is totally false in some ways. People are completely and absolutely capable of enduring bad and hard endings, and sometimes, one would even rather watch a good film about real life rather than yet another Marvel superhero movie. 

    However, it is also true that it is easier for Hollywood filmmakers to make money on films with happy endings, like sweet love stories.


    Que bien escribe usted el inglés! Espero que mis correcciones sean útiles.

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    May 10, 2018
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    La casa de papel - 10 de mayo Ayer acabado una serie español, La casa de papel. Me encanta La casa de papel mucho cuando vi los primeros episodios, pero después de algún tiempo, comenzó a ser muy aburrida. Esto es porque los personajes eran irritantes y tomaron decisiones estúpidas. El único personaje que me gusta era Raquel Murillo, la inspectora, pero ella también tomó muchas decisiones imprudentes. Pero me gusta la música de esta serie, y me gusta también a escuchar el acento español. Ahora voy a ver la serie El ministerio del tiempo. Espero que esta serie es mucho mejor de La casa de papel!
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    La serie Gran hotel - mayo de 9 Me gustan las series españolas. El acento español es muy hermoso y quiero escucharlo cuando estoy estudiando español. La primera serie que vi en español era Gran Hotel. Me encanta esta serie porque es muy divertida y los valores de producción son increíbles. Mis personajes favoritos son el detective Ayala porque él es muy inteligente y gracioso, y Andres, un camarero de Gran Hotel, porque él es el personaje más sincero en la serie. Me gusta también Alicia, la heredera del hotel, y su madre, Teresa. El villano es Diego, y él es muy interesante también. Actualmente, me gustan todos los personajes de esta serie. Vi la serie por primera vez con los subtítulos en inglés, y pues con los subtítulos en español. Ahora estoy viendo esta serie sin subtítulos.
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    Nowadays

    Hi everybody

    I know that I manged a very basic english and I have to effort more and learn more vocabulary, but so far I think that I can communicate in basic conversations, but I cant! When people talk to me now I understand more than before but I want to answer fluently and I have to take my time to put in order my ideas and then to speak, it is like I dont know english at all. I know this is about practice and practice and practice, and every day I will do my best to improve my speaking skills.

    luis.


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    I know that I have a very basic understanding of English and I have to make an effort to learn more vocabulary. So far I think I can communicate in basic conversations, but I want to improve! When people talk to me now I can understand more than I did before but I want to answer fluently. Right now, I have to take some time to put my ideas into order before I speak. It is like I don't know English at all. I know this is about practice, practice, and more practice, so I will do my best to improve my speaking skills every day.


    Muy bueno Luis! Espero que mis correcciones le ayudará.

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