Once I woke up and realized that I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">stayed</s> was alone <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on the land</s> in the world
Once I woke up and realized that I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">stayed</s> was alone <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on the land </s>in the world. I looked out the window and saw that there was nobody there. I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">turned on</s> went onto the internet and looked through the <s>web camera</s> webcam <s>at the</s> of streets of other countries. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">There was</s> They were empty too. Electricity turned off in the evening <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">(not sure what this is conveying)</em>.
What <s>to do </s>do I do? I walk through the streets. The shops were open. All of the things that surround me were available. I must continue <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to go</s> on living.
On the first day, I was <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">riding in</s> driving a car through the streets and appreciated the situation. The second day, I began to go to different apartments. I've always wanted to see how other people live. I also hoped to meet someone. The next day, I took the <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">best doll in human’s growth</s> best human-sized doll in the toy department and began to talk to her.
<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Like so </s>I have lived a month like this. When I'm feeling bad, I go to the gym and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">do boxing </s>box. When I want to dance, I turn on children's musical toys <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on</s> with batteries and dance. Also, I was in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> a government building and read a lot of secret documents.
It's summer now, so I am planting a lot of vegetables and fruits.
Where are all the people? Why <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">have I only stayed </s>am I the only one who stayed? What is the meaning of this life? Fear, loneliness and anguish took me.
<em style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">This is actually a very interesting writing exercise. You did a pretty good job with it! The most important feedback I'd give is: use commas to separate dependent clauses like "When I'm feeling bad" or "On the first day". Otherwise, the mistakes are minor and you mostly got the point across. Good work!</em>