Would you rather be granted 3 wishes of your choice 10 years from today or be granted 1 wish today?
As I had no idea that came to my mind to practice my English, I have decided to use a topic generator. It came with this : Would you rather be granted 3 wishes of your choice 10 years from today or be granted 1 wish today?
Well, interesting... after few minutes of thinkings I decided to be granted 1 wish today.
First, I don't know if i would be still alive in 10 years (Attention, when you are too greedy, you can lose. hello coronavirus !).
Also, I could wish something that could help to realise other desires.
What do you think?
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As I had no idea that came to my mind to practice my English, I have decided to use a topic generator. It came with this : Would you rather be granted 3 wishes of your choice 10 years from today or be granted 1 wish today?
Well, interesting... after few minutes of thinking I decided to be granted 1 wish today.
First, I don't know if I would be still alive in 10 years (Attention, when you are too greedy, you can lose, hello coronavirus !).
Also, I could wish something that could help me with other wishes.
What do you think?
I think a wish today is a better idea too, it could save the lives of many people, if it's the right wish!
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Would you rather be granted 3 wishes of your choice 10 years from today or be granted 1 wish today?
As I had no idea that came to my mind to practice my English, I have decided to use a topic generator. It came with this: would you rather be granted 3 wishes of your choice 10 years from today or be granted 1 wish today?
Well, interesting...after few minutes of thinkings thinking for a few minutes, I decided would choose to be granted 1 wish today.
Note, when you are too greedy, you can lose. Hello coronavirus !).
Also, I could wish for something that could help to realise other desires.
What do you think?
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- When using colons [ : ], there is no space before it, but there is one space after it. For example: like so.
- After a colon, the next word is not a new sentence, so you do not capitalize it unless it is a proper noun.
- When you are using parentheses [ ( ) ], you do not need to capitalize the first word unless it is a proper noun.
- "Thinkings" is not a word. Thinking is the correct usage here.
- I would put a comma between thinking and "I decided to...", as the first part is a dependent clause.
There are a few other changes as well, but I'll leave it here for now to keep corrections focused.
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