please help me with my presentation any structure mistakes or suggestion kindly make it . I'd like to talk about my favorite movie it's (fargo) It talks about someone who works for an automobile company and he is the general manager , he is married to a beautiful wife and he has an 8 year old child , he prepared his feasibility study about his dream business so he went to his father in law and presented it in the front of him but he refused and he told him money doesn't grow on trees you have to depend on yourself and to take responsibility yourself. he got a deal with 2 criminals and they agreed there will no be blood in this plan . they burgled the house , kidnapped his wife and they hurt the child . they drove their car heading to the sfe place once the sheriff stopped the car and he charged them with reckless driving , there were quiet insane , the weirdo killed the sheriff . a car passed right them and saw the murder , the 2 criminals followed them and they killed them too.

Hello , anybody here wants to practice English right now ? upper intermediate to advanced