Are modern people happier than those living in the past?

Not really. I think people nowadays are less happier than those <s>were</s> in the past.

Even though the standards of living for most people have risen dramatically, for instance, we have electricity, flush toilets which were not available even for an emperor in ancient time.

However, a lot of people are still not unhappy. The underlying problem is that we’re living in a society where the gap between rich and poor is increasingly widening.

And the happiness lies in comparison.

I mean when people feel they’re leading a <s>more</s> far superior life than others, the sense of happiness is stronger. If not, people <s>would</s> feel unbalanced.

As most people have access to the internet, we can see how extravagant lifestyles celebrities have on Instagram, and we are exposed to highly idealised and curated images on our social media feeds.

It seems that our acquaintances lead happier, more successful lives than us. This distorted images make us feel pressured to keep up and we’re inadequate.

Please help me find errors in it and make it sound more like a natural oral speech. A lot of thanks!

Newborn baby

I wiped carefully my daughter’s body every day when she was newborn. One day, <s>When </s> when she was sleeping, my husband and I looked at her and my husband found something behind her ear. It looked like blood. He panicked and said we should call 911 but it didn't look like that she was in pain<s> she didn’t look like feels pain</s> so I rubbed it and could take <s>them </s>it off easily and it was smelly. It turned out just dirt. I felt like really a bad mom.

Thanks , I will definitely read it.

<s>here</s> Here are some <s>writing</s> sentences <s>i </s> I wish you would help me to check whether it's a right expression

<s>it's</s> It's like questions that <s>i</s> I asked <s>for</s> myself and <s>i</s> I myself gave <s>it</s> the answers

Q:<s>i</s> I think you<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">'</s><s>re</s> were looking forward to the architecture research .why did it fail ?

A:first, before reaching it the tour is tiring in a long distance.

second.the one we met at first was closed .even the emotion when gaming are waved.after frustration we need feedback which was not given.that disappointed us.

and the third .i still believed my friend came back to this fild because of his fancy to beautiful buildings.then it turned out i was wrong.he seem unlikely to be in a mood to talk about them.

and most important reason is i didnot have a decent sleeping

they can be seen at the first place to judge a trip plan whether it's good or not.

conclusion:

so i guess what result in this failure are the details you have no idea to dig out at very beginning.try harder next time

Correct my English plz:)

When I go <s>to</s> on a trip , I don’t use a package tour because I like searching the hotels and airplanes. <s>it</s> It makes me so excited. I guess I can stumble on new things when I travel my self.<s>and</s> I feel it’s so amazing. And I like to meet some new nice people.

Before I go to the trip I search the restaurants and the shops and I watch the reviews. Since I go to foreign country I might as well eat delicious food and go to nice places.

There <s>is</s> are many beautiful places in japan.

In my town, there is a beautiful river. You can swim there in summer. This river is transparent. Many people from other prefecture / cities / regions come <s>there </s> here. I <s>do the camp</s> go camping every year with friends. You can see the beautiful stars and shooting<s>s</s> stars. ( the time should be mentioned , for example " Last year ") I watched the shooting stars while I was laying on the boat. It was so amazing.

Some people says that there is nothing in my town ,but I want them to know my town is so beautiful.

my self-introduction

How happy it is to <s>introduct </s> introduce my self to you !

Firstly,I will <s>introduct</s> introduce my self. I am luguoping, a freshman from this university.<s>And</s> I am a positive and easy-going teen.If you ask me <s>that</s> about my interests,I will answer.I have many interests <s>Such</s> such as pingpong, basketball, ride.So if you want to do some <s>ativities</s> activities with me,I will very happy and positive.

Secondly,I will <s>introduct</s> introduce my hometown. My hometown is zhanjiang, a beautiful city.As is known to us all,zhanjiang is famous for its seafood. <s>Beacuse</s> Because / As zhanjiang is near to sea,the locals <s>is</s> eat seafood <s>fluently</s> frequently and those <s>sea</s> dishes are very delicious.So the culture of zhanjiang is very abundant.Welcome to zhanjiang.This is my hometown.

Only by listening everyone's introduction can we know more about each other<s>s</s>.I am very happy to <s>introduct</s> introduce my self .Thank you.

Dialog: We Have to Talk

WE HAVE TO TALK

🙆‍♂️ Happy Birthday, Brenda!

🙆 Good morning my dear

🙆‍♂️ Today I will make your favourite birthday cake: chocolate truffle (a dessert made of condensed milk and chocolate)

🙆 Eduardo, we have to talk.

🙆‍♂️ Hmm.. it's look serious

🙆 Now, I am 40.

🙆‍♂️ And you continue to look beautiful

🙆 Thanks, Eduardo, but with the age I have started to want different things

🙆‍♂️ Different? What do you mean?

🙆 I haven't been honest with you.

🙆‍♂️ Brenda, I can't believe it

🙆 I have to say the <s>true</s> truth.

🙆‍♂️ Ah no! is it your assistant?

🙆 What?

🙆‍♂️ He is very <s>gorgeous</s> handsome.

🙆 What do you mean?

🙆‍♂️ You are 40. You said it yourself.

🙆 Eduardo... I don't like your cake. That is<s>!</s> what I said<s>! </s>

🙆‍♂️ What? I am not understanding...

🙆 I don't have an affair. I just don't like the cake that you always make on my birthday.

🙆‍♂️ Phew... That is ok!

🙆 Why ?

🙆‍♂️ I hate to make cake. That's why <s>because</s> I just make one per year.

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