here are some writing i wish you would help me to check whether it's a right expression
it's like questions i asked for myself and i gave it answers
Q:i think youre looking forward to the architecture research .why it failed.
A:the research is that i go to the city where target buildings are sited,having a lose experience in personal
first,before reaching the first building in my list the tour was tiring as for a long distance to go.
second.That one we went for was closed in that day.We were in a not good mood and need feedback which was not given.that disappointed us.
And the third .I still believed my friend came back to this fild (we majored in architecture designing both.And he once had changed his job designing for other things for a short period of time)Because of his fancy to beautiful buildings.Then it turned out i was wrong.He seems unlikely to be in a mood to talk about fantastic architecture.
and most important reason is i didnot have a decent sleeping.for this research.i took a flight in 6 am.It's terrible sleeping at airport.
so i guess what result in this failure are the details you have no idea to dig out at very beginning.try harder next time
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Q:i I think you're were looking forward to the architecture research .why did it fail ?
I cannot understand the answer .I think that there are some missing parts
A:first, before reaching it the tour is tiring in a long distance.
second.the one we met at first was closed .even the emotion when gaming are waved.after frustration we need feedback which was not given.that disappointed us.
and the third .i still believed my friend came back to this fild because of his fancy to beautiful buildings.then it turned out i was wrong.he seem unlikely to be in a mood to talk about them.
and most important reason is i didnot have a decent sleeping
they can be seen at the first place to judge a trip plan whether it's good or not.
conclusion:
so i guess what result in this failure are the details you have no idea to dig out at very beginning.try harder next time
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