Hi Ümit, I would only do text corrections of this size as part of a paid lesson.

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The simple answer is use ‘with’ not ‘at’. There are several alternatives you could also use such as: - she is not au fait with technology - she is not tech savvy - she is a bit of a Luddite - technology is not her forte - technology is not her strong suit - technology baffles her Please note: these alternatives use a higher level of English so if you are unfamiliar with these expressions simply use the first option. There is no need to use big words simply for the sake of it when the meaning is the same. Additionally, some of these carry a negative connotation (Luddite) which you may not wish to convey.

This sentence doesn’t sound very natural. I don’t see the link with your career post graduating and a trip to France, did you move to France? Instead try: After graduating, I worked as a cleaner until I went/moved to France.