I think the best thing which I have done that made my parents feel proud of me, was about graduating from my college. Because they gave their all support to me to reach my goal.
Firstly, I graduated from military academy as a military pilot. It was a big deal for me. Because, until that time I have never leaved my home, so it was a big problem for me. After I finished my first class, I used to living away from my family.
Secondly, as you predict, the military academy has rigid rules which can not be ignored or delayed. In order to graduate from military academy, I studied so hard, and I know that my family have supported me so much, not only financially, but also emotionally.
In conclusion, I want to share that, I have a son who is seven-years- old, and he has just started to elementary school, and he has been taking good education, and we have a good feeling when we talk about him with his teachers. Then I understand that it is a difficult and complicated situation which is never being neglected.
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I think the best thing that I have done is that i made my parents feel proud of me, I graduated from my college , Because they gave me all their support to reach my goal. Firstly, I graduated from military academy as a military
pilot. It was a big deal for me. Because, until that time I have never left my
home, so it was a big problem for me. After I finished my first class, I used to
live away from my family. Secondly, as you reckon, the military academy has
Strict rules which can not be ignored or delayed. In order to graduate from the
military academy, I had to study so hard, and I knew that my family have supported me
so much, not only financially, but also emotionally. In conclusion, I want to
share that, I have a son who is seven-years- old, and he has just started elementary school, and he has been studying very well, and we get great feedback when we talk about him with his teachers. I understand that it is a
difficult and complicated situation which can never be neglected.
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I think the best thing which I have done that made my parents feel proud of me,
was about graduating from my college. Because they gave their all support to me
to reach my goal. Firstly, I graduated from military academy as a military
pilot. It was a big deal for me. Because, until that time I have never leaved my
home, so it was a big problem for me. After I finished my first class, I used to
living away from my family. Secondly, as you predict, the military academy has
rigid rules which can not be ignored or delayed. In order to graduate from
military academy, I studied so hard, and I know that my family have supported me
so much, not only financially, but also emotionally. In conclusion, I want to
share that, I have a son who is seven-years- old, and he has just started to
elementary school, and he has been taking good education, and we have a good
feeling when we talk about him with his teachers. Then I understand that it is a
difficult and complicated situation which is never being neglected.
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