To learn faster
I always feel so anxious to learn faster... It's because I lost many opportunities
to not be fluent or even
to be an advanced English Speaker, but I know these things
will come with time (and I could dedicate more time to improve my English If I wouldn't work outside 49 hours per week).
Well, in my free time, I have been trying
to read some books. I've already finished one: The Speckled Band of Sherlock Holmes. I
finished it! Now I'm trying Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, but this is so hard!! I couldn't pass the second page yet! D:
But it's ok. I'm gonna get it. I believe! Haha
Overall pretty good. I understand your meaning in every sentence. I felt some of the corrections just made it more natural and easier to understand. I think sometimes your grammar is correct, in that I understand, you just say it in an unnatural way. This is quite common though and I would say your English is really good because I can understand what you're trying to say.
Hope I helped and if you practice more your English is going to become amazing!
by the way, I didn't correct a few things because they are correct.... But sometimes just not very natural which is okay ;)