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To learn faster I always feel so anxious to learn faster... It's because I lost many opportunities for not be fluent or even an advanced English Speaker yet, but I know these things become with time (and I could dedicate more time to improve my English If I wouldn't work outside 49 hours per week). Well, in my free time, I have been trying some books. I've already finished one: The Speckled Band of Sherlock Holmes. I got it! Now I'm trying Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, but this is so harder! I couldn't pass the second page yet! D: But it's ok. I'm gonna get it. I believe! Haha

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Hi Laryssa, here are some corrections :-)


To learn faster

I always feel so anxious to learn faster... It's because I lost many opportunities to not be fluent or even an advanced English Speaker yet, but I know these things come with time (and I could dedicate more time to improving my English, if I didn't work outside 49 hours per week).
Well, in my free time, I have been trying to read some books. I've already finished one: The Speckled Band of Sherlock Holmes. I got it! Now I'm trying Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, but this is so much harder! I couldn't pass the second page yet! D:
But it's ok. I'm will get it. I believe! Haha


Well done on working so hard with your language studies :-) Your writing is really quite good, only a couple of things here and there need some attention. But these are minor things!! Congratulations on reading books!! I can't do this in Portuguese yet.... well maybe if I have Google translator open with me I can :-D


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To learn faster

I always feel so anxious to learn faster... It's because I lost many opportunities to not be fluent or even to be an advanced English Speaker, but I know these things will come with time (and I could dedicate more time to improve my English If I wouldn't work outside 49 hours per week).
Well, in my free time, I have been trying to read some books. I've already finished one: The Speckled Band of Sherlock Holmes. I finished it! Now I'm trying Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, but this is so hard!! I couldn't pass the second page yet! D:
But it's ok. I'm gonna get it. I believe! Haha


Overall pretty good. I understand your meaning in every sentence. I felt some of the corrections just made it more natural and easier to understand. I think sometimes your grammar is correct, in that I understand, you just say it in an unnatural way. This is quite common though and I would say your English is really good because I can understand what you're trying to say.

Hope I helped and if you practice more your English is going to become amazing!

by the way, I didn't correct a few things because they are correct.... But sometimes just not very natural which is okay ;)

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