Delicious foods in China ( 這個我真不知道怎麼改 因為我覺得內文大意是寫 為甚麼想要到Italki 練習英文 所以我覺得把標題換成下面的比較好... -> A turning point in my English learning )

->( 換成這句有比較好?)中國地大物博，好吃的東西自然不少。 With all the lands and resources in China, many sorts of Chinese cuisines were invented and served.

我问过很多外国朋友他们喜欢吃什么？Every time I asked my foreign friends about what their favorite Chinese cuisine is,
他们都说喜欢吃火锅  most of them would name "Hot pot".
有一次我们吃火锅 In one of the occasions, I had hot pot with some of my foreign friends, and
我很想和他们交流是否喜欢吃 I would really like to know whether they are a fan of some sorts of foods that they may find peculiar,
鸭肠，毛肚，鸭血，鸡胗，茼蒿，生菜，豆芽，白菜such as , duck intestines,beef stomach,duck blood,chicken gizzards,crowndaisy chrysanthemum,lettuce or sean sprout.
但我发现我却连简单的 However, I realised that, I don't know how to express some common Chinese source/ ingredients in English, like 
蒜汁，辣椒油，小葱，芝麻，花生酱，醋，酱油，麻酱garlic juice，spicy，green onion，sesame，peanut butter，sour，soy souce，Majiang(sesame source)
都说不出来
從那一刻起,我就想努力的提高我的英語能力 Starting from that moment, I wish I could advance in my English learning and 

然後把中国的食物介绍给更多人。until some other days, I could introduce our Chinese foods to more foreigners properly in English .

I hope you would not stint your criticism if there are anything inappropriate in the above translation.