On your essay, you made great corrections on your second edition by yourself.　What a difference you made from the original one. Great work！I'm looking forward to practicing you for your oral exam. きょうは、たのしかったです。ありがとう。

Arigato gozaimashita! Thank you for today's lesson! Your Japanese is great! Hope you have a great time in Japan, if you want to practice conversations, let me know!:) ありがとうございました！ またね！