It cannot be helped but･･･

This season, there are too many people than usual in Tokyo.--> Right now, there are more people than usual in Tokyo, because new recruits from all around the country are gathered in Tokyo for new employee training sessions.
Because the new recruit from the nationwide is gathered to Tokyo and have a new employee training session.

Not that all companies have the headquarter in Tokyo, but many companies have a headquarters in Tokyo. --> Not that every company has headquarters in Tokyo, but many of them do. 

Therefore the commuter train is more crowded than usual, and I am fed up. (Good sentence!)
Generally, the training session will finish almost a month, so I hope that April would pass soon. --> Generally, the training sessions will take a whole month (or-> will finish at the end of the month), so I hope that April will be over soon. 

If you would like more help with your English, please feel free to send me a message :-). 

Swimming pool

I'll go to the swimming pool with my family in the afternoon. Normally I have to work on Mondays afternoons but my daughter has holidays so I want to spend time with her doing outside activities.

I'll write some sentences:

1. There are is 72% battery left on my mobile phone. --> OR you can say: My phone battery is at 72%. 
2. This is the second entry here by my mobile phone.
3. My daughter is playing with her dolls while I type this these words.
4. My new baby called Fiorella will be born on in June. 
5. I want to ride on my bike through the city.
6. I would like to buy a drone to record great videos and spend time outside with my family.
7. My daughter loves drawing. She has a lot of creativity.
8. Many men are traveling to Turkey to solve problems about growing hair. (?Does this mean they are bald?) You could say: Many men are traveling to Turkey to find a way to grow their hair. 

Thanks.

IELTS writing practice: task2

In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(Reference: https://www.ielts-exam.net/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/965/)

　In the present, many job markets are more likely to more consider practical skills rather than theoretical skills for productivity and efficiency. Therefore, some people suggests an idea that there would not be any formal t  qualifications in job applications for all in the future. As for this opinion, I believe that we still need to acquire theoretical skills as the same as practical skills.
　Admittedly, in terms of language skills in job applications, we should reconsider a way to measure the communication skills not rely too much on the  test scores score of tests. For example, most companies require applicants to submit their English test scores score of English tests such as TOEIC and TOEFL to judge their communication skills in the case of which they are working with clients or colleagues in different counties. However, there are some people who get high test scores score of the test just by following the strategy of textbooks or sites on the Internet, which tell people the way to get high scores by introducing the structure of the test. Thus, it does not mean that all people who hold high scores can use English practically in business situations. Therefore, it can be said that this case is brought by the fact that the system of job applications depends too much on the theoretical qualifications.
　However, it does not show mean that it is totally safe for everyone to have practical skills in job markets. Because of the presence of AI (artificial intelligence), it is predicted that over 90% of human mankind jobs will be replaced by computers. Hence, as it is not an only a way to rely on practical skills to get over the further complicated world, we should also have the perspective to utilize the technology by seeing each context of the society. As At that time, it would be essential for people to use theoretical intelligent intelligence in order to consider and forecast predict a situation or circumstance. Therefore, it is important that we use technology with these this knowledge.
　To sum up, we ought to reconsider the importance of theoretical knowledge in order to turn the skills into practical use as there are some misunderstandings to assess the skills. Also, there is still a demand for theoretical skills so as to confront the threat of new technology.