It cannot be helped but･･･
This season, there are too many people than usual in Tokyo.
Because the new recruit from the nationwide is gathered to Tokyo and have a new employee training session.
Not that all companies have the headquarter in Tokyo, but many companies have a headquarters in Tokyo.
Therefore the commuter train is more crowded than usual, and I am fed up.
Generally, the training session will finish almost a month, so I hope that April would pass soon.
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Tokyo is Crowded
Currently, there are more people
than usual in Tokyo.
That’s because the new recruits from nationwide are coming to Tokyo for their new
employee training session. Not that all companies have their headquarters in
Tokyo, but given that it is Japan’s capital, many of them do. As a result, the
commuter trains are more crowded than usual, and I am fed up. Generally, their
training sessions will end in about a month, so I hope that April will pass
soon.
Hi Shino. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentence to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.
*This is a great usage of a photograph, one which really illustrates both the situation, as well as your resulting frustration of being involved in it!
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It cannot be helped but･･･
This season, there are too many people than usual in Tokyo.--> Right now, there are more people than usual in Tokyo, because new recruits from all around the country are gathered in Tokyo for new employee training sessions.Because the new recruit from the nationwide is gathered to Tokyo and have a new employee training session.
Not that all companies have the headquarter in Tokyo, but many companies have a headquarters in Tokyo. --> Not that every company has headquarters in Tokyo, but many of them do.
Therefore the commuter train is more crowded than usual, and I am fed up. (Good sentence!)
Generally, the training session will finish almost a month, so I hope that April would pass soon. --> Generally, the training sessions will take a whole month (or-> will finish at the end of the month), so I hope that April will be over soon.
If you would like more help with your English, please feel free to send me a message :-).
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