A lot of people like reading. You learn different things for your whole your life. And you should read books to know more about our wonderful world. What books do you prefer? What books are your favorite? As for me, I prefer books about our society, about our history. It is really important to know how the world was created and how the world is changing (?) . But also I want to start reading scientific books. Science is a very important part of our civilization. It influences on us, in our everyday life. Without science and technology we wouldn't be who we are. What interesting books can you recommend for me to read about science and techology?

Good paragraph! One popular book on science is Stephen Hawking's <em>A Brief History of Time</em>

It's my first time in New York. It's very overwhelming in this city because I always consider myself a city girl and this is the greatest city in the world. that I never could have never believed it. I went there on Christmas Day and no stores were open that day. It's very frustrating on this prominent holiday. Because the stores and bars, all of them closed very early that I could barely find one place for dinner and then get back home early that day. Besides this, everything else in NY is amazing in NY. I'll share more details in other notes. Look forward to any correction to my essay. Mistake makes progress. Love to know any professional thoughts! Thanks!

Very good writing! All of your ideas were clear, just a few correctins on word choice and sentence structure

People often use be going to or the present continous to talk about future plans. I am going to swim tomorrow. I am picking him up at the airport tomorrow. I think of 'will' as a little more formal way to create the future, whereas 'be going to' is more conversational. "Shall" is extremely formal and is rarely used (at least in the United States).

I think of 'will' as more formal and 'going' as more conversational.

I believe cake is noncount. "Have some cake" not "Have some cakes" Think about it this way: you eat a peice of bread and cake, but you probably eat a whole biscuit. Therefore it's easier to 'count' a biscuit, because it is only one serving. But bread and cake having multiple servings, so they are noncount

Compared to us, he should know more

I'm preparing for the IELTS test, if you have any suggestion to my article please let me know. Thank you. :) -- Question: Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? -- It becomes a heated debate whether museums should charge for admission. In my opinion, I agree with charging for entering a museum but I also have some suggestions to help those who cannot enter museum due to financal problems. There are some reasons for my standpoints and I will explain them in the following paragraphs. First of all, I believe some people will support the idea, entering museum without paying money because they think artworks in the museum belong to everyone and all of us have the right to appreciate them for free. Secondly, some of them might declare that it will be an encouragement for people to know more about art if they do not need to pay. These two points benefit to people, however, they forget to mention the shortcomings. The main factor for me to support charging for admission is filtering the crowd. Tickets sold to those who really like exhibitions could prevent their ability to enjoy the moment. Avoiding people who just want to get into building for air conditioning and disturb appreciators. In addition, people will cherish this chance to watch this display if they spend money for admission. Meanwhile, for those poor persons and students, museum could offer discount tickets to them. The money also supports museum to maintain the environment in order to provide a better space to everyone. In conclusion, I reaffirm my statement that I believe the advantage of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages. People pay for the ticket for protecting their right to view the artworks they really love and also help preserve museums.

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She is an important person to me. She has been taking care of me since I was a child, and cooks meals for me when I am hungry, and sings songs to the babyfor me before I go to bed. I like to eat the food she makes, like hamburgers, bacon sandwiches, even onion soup. all are my favorite foods. She always protects me and makes me happy. Sometimes she taught me to study and sometimes taught me to write, and she also bought my favorite clothes, pants, and Jordans, etc. When we go out to play, she will first planned the trip, no matter if it is train tickets, hotel reservations, or restaurant reservations, everything will be done by her. And I want to say is I love you to her, thank her for every thing.