i and the army
In my country, army is necessarily, and moreover, it is waste of human's time. Regular servise in army doesn't give any benefit. Working without pay during one years is violation of humans right. You need listen commands persons which you don't know a whole year. But in my country, regular service is pride. People which waste one years themselves life, proud of this. When i told with these people about regular army, they answer me differently. For example: " I lose two years my life(before army service was two years)", "Army is necessary in order to make a man out for you" and "Army is a necessary in order to get a job". First kind of person, understand that waste yourselves time, but he aniway pride this. Second kind of person don't know what is personality. Third kind of person just afraided. I didn't servise in army and i hope, people my country will be oppose it, and i hope it wiil be stop regular.
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In my country, army is mandatory, and moreover, it is a waste of a person's time. Regular servise in the army doesn't give any benefit. Working without pay for one years is a violation of humans rights. You need to listen to the commands of a person whom you don't know for a whole year. But in my country, regular service is a source of pride. People who waste one years of their life are proud of this. When i told with these people about the regular army, they answer me differently. For example: " I lose two years of my life (before army service was two years)", "Army is necessary in order to make a man out of you" and "Army is a necessary in order to get a job". To the first kind of person, understand that it is a waste yourselves of your time, but he is proud of this anyway. The second kind of person doesn't know what a personality is. The third kind of person is just afraided. I didn't serve in the army and i hope, people my country will be opposed to it, and i hope it will be stopped regular.Good paragraph. Don't forget to capitalize the word 'I' and watch your singular and plural nouns.
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