Could you help me to write an e-mail?

Hello! I am writing the following e-mail to a foreign institution and I'd like to know if it is well written:

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this e-mail to ask about the scholarships offered by the institution. If possible, I would like to have the following points clarified:

1 - I am Brazilian and I am studying languages (English and Portuguese) at a university here in Brazil. Considering that I will graduate in 2018, I would like to know if it would be possible for me to apply for one of the scholarships you are offering in the current application. If yes, what kind of courses could I choose?

2 - What is the role does the Brazilian university, in which I currently study, may have in the process? What kind of document should I request?

3 - What kind of proficiency test is required?

Thank you for your attention.

Regards,

Anderson

Near perfect. I only made very minor corrections. The original first point was fine, but I just changed it a little bit to make it flow better in my opinion. The second point was just slightly off, but overall I think you did really well with this.

Siberia

I live in the middle of Siberia and I know that a lot people from other places have a myriad of stereotypes about Siberia. :) Many people think that it is cold and snowy for a whole  the entire  year in Siberia, but we also have summer. We have really hot days (about +30-35°C) and we even  watermelons. Usually a the first snowy day is in the end of October, and the last one in April. And Of course we live with we have really cold weather (about - 30-35°C) sometimes, from about -30 to -35°C, but if one summarize days of this type, it will be about only one month days like these would only add up to about a total of one month.
So, while maybe a bit misunderstood, I think it is overall a good and interesting place to live. :)

This piece is was very well written. I just changed some minor grammatical errors and rewrote some parts to make it flow a little bit smoother. You honestly wrote this better than a lot of "native" English speaking Americans could. [emoji]

Keep it up!

-Shane

P.S. - You've now made me want to visit Siberia. I think it might be a very fascinating place. Siberia is very large though, so would you say that this paragraph applys to all of Siberia?

In love?

I tried to write about a personal story.

Well, i don´t know if I really am in love.... I wonder, does anyone truly know when they're in love? Surely not,
but i think that, when someone is in love, this person will feel pain and suffer... for the smallest thing about your lover, or for the smallest thing that they do wrong.*

Have you ever experienced this?

* I wasn't 100% sure what you wanted to say with this sentence, but I tried my best to translate it.

Great job Ismael! It could use a little bit of work, but you're only going to get better with practice. The good news is that I was able to understand the overall meaning of your writing. Keep it up!

-Shane 

If you can leave a grade of 0 to 10, please.

Today I want to talk about the importance of don't give up your not giving up on your dreams. Last year was a very tiring year for me because I needed had to study a lot, usually from 8am until 10 pm, and some days I didn't have forces on my body the willpower to study another day, do you know understand? But I kept on studying, making doing some exercises, and believing that I Would could achieve that it.
Sometimes I should talk to would tell myself to take it easy, but I couldn't stop doing that because I always thought there was someone, somewhere,  studying more than I did. I was doing that it because, you know, when se you have a dream we you need to fight for it, haven't we don't you? So I was trying hard (ly) to do that.
And now I'm here to say that you to should never give up on your dreams. It will be difficult, and you probably will want to give up, but please don't do that. It's so good to know that you have managed to win accomplish that dream.

7/10, Very well written, but there were some grammatical errors. I was able to understand the entire message that you were trying to send, so that is very good.

Great Job!