Could you help me to write an e-mail? Hello! I am writing the following e-mail to a foreign institution and I'd like to know if it is well written: Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this e-mail to ask ab

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Could you help me to write an e-mail? Hello! I am writing the following e-mail to a foreign institution and I'd like to know if it is well written: Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this e-mail to ask about the scholarships offered by the institution. If possible, I would like to have the following points clarified: 1 - I am Brazilian and I am studying languages (English and Portuguese) at university. Considering that I will graduate in 2018, I would like to know if it would be possible for me to apply for one of the scholarships you are offering in the current application. If yes, what kind of courses could I choose? 2 - What is the role the Brazilian university in which I study may have in the process? What kind of document should I request? 3 - What kind of proficiency test is required? Thank you for your attention. Regards, Anderson

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Could you help me to write an e-mail?

Hello! I am writing the following e-mail to a foreign institution and I'd like to know if it is well written:

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this e-mail to ask about the scholarships offered by the institution. If possible, I would like to have the following points clarified:

1 - I am Brazilian and I am studying languages (English and Portuguese) at a university here in Brazil. Considering that I will graduate in 2018, I would like to know if it would be possible for me to apply for one of the scholarships you are offering in the current application. If yes, what kind of courses could I choose?

2 - What is the role does the Brazilian university, in which I currently study, may have in the process? What kind of document should I request?

3 - What kind of proficiency test is required?

Thank you for your attention.

Regards,

Anderson

Near perfect. I only made very minor corrections. The original first point was fine, but I just changed it a little bit to make it flow better in my opinion. The second point was just slightly off, but overall I think you did really well with this.

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