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I am looking for language exchange Chinese <===> English or Chinese <===>Japanese. This is my school http://www.wzu.edu.tw and this is my info www.linkedin.com/in/tycoon My advantage is I am a Taiwanese I can use Traditional Chinese and Simple Chinese (that is two kind of words system.) I also worked in Beijing in 2009 for one year and even people who live in Beijing said my Chinese is very standard.
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Another fun lesson, see you next time :)
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    【两个月中文写作挑战】【第二星期：工作】【今天：法国的劳动力市场】(14/61)

    大家好，两年前我计划做30天中文写作挑战。现在，我想尝试花两个月进行中文写作挑战。我希望我的中文变得更好。请你们帮助我改善我的短文写作。如果你们看不懂句子的意思，请你问我。谢谢！

    我用的生词：劳动力、打工仔、劳力、拥有、永久合同、官员、临时雇用合同、自由职业、创业、受雇、产业、配餐、财会、医疗领域、危机、失业率、全职、兼职、退休年龄


    【第二星期：工作】【今天：法国的劳动力市场】

    在法国，在2016年，二千四百万个人是打工仔的，也就是说劳力的百分之八十八。在打工仔之中，大多数拥有永久合同（CDI）或是官员（国家的工人，比如市政厅的工人、老师，……），一小部分拥有临时雇用合同（CDD或者interim）。
    ok  If u would like to use "打工仔"  do not  use in Beijing because this vocabulary is from Hong Kong it is from the Tranditional Chinese system
    官员= someone works for the government  and it is directed to any union then we can call them 官员
    国家的工人= 公务员 use this vocabulary 公务员= someone past the exam or test and working in government union to server public people we call them 公务员

    自由职业和创业不太发大，只是说劳力的百分之十二。 change 说 to be "佔"=occupy
    There are some problem What is 劳动力 and 劳力?
    Easy to say 劳动力 is none.  and 劳力 is verb or none. In this sentence, u have to change the 劳力 to be 劳动力

    四分之三在法国受雇的人在第三产业工作，服务的产业，比如商业、配餐、交通、财会、
    医疗领域…… 第一产业，农业，是劳力的百分之三。最后，第二产业，工业，是劳力的百分之十二。>>劳动力
    服务的产业=服务业  this is a vocabulary 

    法国的工作条件比较好，可是由于经济危机失业率提高了。失业主要影响到年轻人 （因为他们没有很多专业经验），没有文凭的人和老人。

    同样，由于经济危机、很多人不可能找到全职的工作。有时，人们选择有兼职的工作，比如母亲可能在星期三不工作所以她可以看孩子们，但是大多数不选择了。
    看=watch =look=see that means u can not 看=watch =look=see a kid all day  so u have to learn a vocabulary 照顾=take care

    在法国，退休年龄是六十二岁的。如果你想退休，你得工作四十二年。如果人们在二十年生日以前工作了得很多，或者他们的工作很辛苦， 他们可以提前退休，几乎六十岁。

    This post or essay is good and almost wonderful because I give u some suggestions in 15 mins.   in 15 mins I can not find any mistake anymore otherwise u want more detail or be native Chinese. 

    bravo!
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    Help me please. Thank you in advance.

    I read a sentence from an article online about language learning, but I don' get it. The sentence goes "The earlier in life you TACKLE a new language, the more proficient you tend to be, especially with pronunciation. “But that doesn’t mean it’s impossible if you start late,” she said." I'm not so savvy about the word "tackle" in uppercase. Could someone explain to me, thanks for any response.

    According to this article says.  and u want to know what the word, tackle, means.

    Tackle= Catch    Maybe u also can change "Tackle" to "control " or " handle"  and it depends on which Chinese words u want to translate or what way u want it to be explained.


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    she/he/it

    She's my very favorite comic book author.
    Unfortunately, But this year came the news of her died of cancer.
    The heart felt real to those who became very fond of her loyal readers.
    In looking forward to the condition of for so long.
    Get is such a wail of the news. Not just because is not a part of the work.
    And for a life, great writer, as well as the disease can not react.
    No matter whether there is in the world after its writer, or her excellent works of literature and art.
    She will exists in my heart, forever. And those who love her people.


    不好意思  請多指教了   有大概想看出你要表達的意思  但是先不管整體上寫起來的意思  先用文法上跟您說明一下一句一句來

    She's my very favorite comic book author. 她是我"最"喜歡的漫畫家

    Favorite 這個英文單字已經有"最"的意思了   所以前面不可以加 very.  請修正

    Unfortunately, But this year came the news of her died of cancer.

    第一， But  B要小寫，  第二，  如果你沒有第二個句子，你不能加But因為，but 是"對等"連結詞跟"and" 一樣 所以請使用兩個以上的句子才把But 拿出來用，不然就直接刪掉。   再來，this year came the news of her died of cancer. 這整個句子都錯了  this year 基本上就只要用comes 不需要用came，因為不是last year，文法上來說應該是說，用簡單現在式第三人稱加S 的用法，因為簡單式 是用來陳述事實，一種週期性，或是永不消滅的定理，再來  This year 不會comes the news 這個該怎麼解釋呢...............年是一個無法製造news的東西，"年"是時間概念 所以， 她不能帶東西來的，一般來說，年月日 時 分 秒  前面都應該有介詞，所以您不能用 This year comes the news  這是語意上的感覺  另外您有發現您的句子有兩個of 嗎?  這樣其實英文語意上也很怪，如果是我要幫你修，我會幫你修成， There is the news about her died of cancer in this year.  這是最標準的說法，但是我知道您想表達的文藝一點，那.........就文藝一點的寫
    Because of cancer, she died and it is from the news in this year.

    The heart felt real to those who became very fond of her loyal readers. 對不起  除了中心的讀者以外我還真看不出來你的表達，但是我用詩的概念去想，你應該是要表達，  由於她的逝去您的心情更加成為一個忠心的讀者  如果要這樣講的話
    第一  感覺=feel 不需要用過去式 因為如果要變成忠心的讀者是永遠的事  請用現在簡單式
    第二  如果你用了feel 又用了to 那代表 to 後面要帶出一個動詞 Verb. 不然不要帶to 但是我相信你是要用to 去當介系詞 去帶 但是如果是這樣的話，those 後面又要帶一個名詞 none.才對  不然你後面不會再用一個關係代名詞去做連接  既然是關系"代名詞" 前面請加名詞none. real 的位置也讓我不確定她的詞性 所以我修看看 
    My heart feels really sorry then I became very fond and loyal readers of her.  


    In looking forward to the condition of for so long. 這一句我也看不懂  condition 這個字你要表達的意思 不過我在猜你一錠不是要翻譯成"條件" 我猜你要翻的是 狀況狀態這個字眼  先說第一個字吧

    in 直接就拿掉了  Looking forward to (這是一個最標準的慣用法  不會在改了)

    再來您有看到你有兩個介係詞放在一起嗎? of for   這也是文法上的錯   會讓人搞不懂語意  

    要我猜你要說的應該是  期待這樣的情況可以維持很久很久  幫你修

    Looking forward to this situation as long as well.

    Get is such a wail of the news. Not just because is not a part of the work. 這一句  完全猜不出來  對不起這一句我想了十三分鐘  但是

    Get 是動詞 Verb.   is 是be 動詞 Be verb. 所以原則上這兩個字本來就不能再一起，


    And for a life, great writer, as well as the disease can not react.  這一句又想了八分鐘  也是想不出來要表達甚麼
    整個句子沒有動詞 verb.   雖然你有用can 但是can 又叫助動詞 沒有動詞可以用的情況下才能冒出來但是看起來好像沒有必要。

    你這是中文詩的概念我有點想猜  你的中文是，  整個生命，一個偉大的作者，以及疾病無法復原

    要讓我修  我會寫  For whole life, she is a great writer, but the disease cannot be recoverable.

    No matter whether there is in the world after its writer, or her excellent works of literature and art. 這一句也妙了  又看了十一分鐘

    我猜啦 因為我有去對照你上面那一句  如果我沒有猜錯的話  你想表達的是
    因為這樣一個偉大的作家 因病無法復原  (另一個可能性是   因病而無法在做出以前的作品)  所以才有上一句接的是

    不論是死後的世界還是文學上藝術的作品  我會幫你修

    No matter what is the world will be after this writer died, or her excellent works of literature and art.

    She will exists in my heart, forever. And those who love her people.   還是文法的問題  will 是助動詞  後面的動詞一律要原型 所以存在= exist 不能加S   其他的我就看不懂了  因為您用了關代 但您的用法又錯  關代本來就不容易翻 語法又不對 在下實在真想不出來該怎麼猜

    原則上應該是不會有外國人幫你改了，因為外國人應該完完全全看不懂的，
    希望有幫助道您，謝謝多指教了

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    OK "你来做我的眼睛“ it depends on which one tell u and how u want to think, deeper thinking or just as the words mean. 你来做我的眼睛= let you be my eyes. This is in words mean but eyes are to see, to watch. In my opinion, this sentence = I would like to let you guide me. Talk about this you can listen this " https://youtu.be/k4V3Mo61fJM " "light will guide you home" so I guess this sentence might be from some romantic situation or from the book or even someone recognitize you are very important for who speak out this sentence.
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    面试结束时，招聘人员常常问你如果你有别的问题。这是很有意思，因为人选能得知工作条件、工作的期望，和以下招聘流程。
    After the interview, HR always ask u if u have any questions?' and here "if". Yeah "if" can be = 如果  but here u can use "是否"



    为了给招聘人员好印象，面试以后，你能给招聘人员发谢意的电子邮件。如果面试好进行， 你能有别的面试。
    如果面试好进行， 你能有别的面试。=  if the all process is going well then u might have another or next chance or opportunity .= 如果面試進行的順利，你能(可以)有下一次的面試

    当招聘过程中，有很多人选，所以即使面试好进行，你也得找别的工作机会， 因为公司能选择别的人选！
    所以即使面试好进行= however, even the process of interview is going well = 所以即使面试进行的顺利


    ok, I spent an hour to give u suggestions and hope it is useful.

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    OK, it almost perfect but if u would like to smoothly I will let u know.

    【两个月中文写作挑战】【第二星期：工作】【今天：工作的面试】(13/61)

    大家好，两年前我计划做30天中文写作挑战。现在，我想尝试花两个月进行中文写作挑战。我希望我的中文变得更好。请你们帮助我改善我的短文写作。如果你们看不懂句子的意思，请你问我。谢谢！
    我用的生词：招聘过程、何时、活动领域、运作、内向、压力、抽搐、诚实、得知、期望、谢意
    【第二星期：工作】【今天：工作的面试】
    在法国的招聘过程，面试比较重要。面试时是公司对人选见面。
    在法国的招聘过程，面试比较重要。面试时是公司主管对人选见面。 ok this is a grammar.   主管=Supervisor
    This means the company is an object or building or a none. so actually company can not interview people. 
    Who interview people?  It must be a human being so u have to add 主管

    面试以前，人选需要很准备。你得能说明为什么你是好的人选，而且你在公司里怎么看你的未来。你也得知道公司的活动领域、产品和服务、运作。招聘人员真不喜欢对公司不感兴趣的人选。

    Before = 之前  = 以前    but  之前  more like the "before what u do something" "以前  more like u told people something was happened.  For example,  以前他是我的好朋友，現在他不是了  
    人选需要很准备  this sentence is wrong 
    人选 = candidates . Actually candidates can not be prepare. so what we prepare?   it is data = 资料=材料 
    what is different between 资料 and 材料 
    In Taiwan or Hong Kong, People said data=资料  that is Traditional Chinese system using.
    In China  (easpecially in Beijing ) people said data= 材料  this is simply Chinese system using.

    面试的天，你需要穿好看的衣服，对招聘人员笑和不象内向。压力时，有的人有抽搐，比如跟头发或者笔玩，很重要不做这种东西。当面试中，你得，跟兴趣和诚实，回答招聘人员的问题。

    面试的天  It looks like u want to mean " the interview day" but it is not 面试的天  There are some ways u can use.
    面试当天 or 面试那天     当or那 means  that day or that monment.  

    不象内向  不像内向  second word is wrong . And yeah u can just say  不像内向 but if u want it to be smoothly sentenced.  I will suggest u use  " 看起来 不那么内向 " =  Smile to HR and let self-looks like not introverted, weak or empty.   

    很重要不做这种东西  = it is very important and do not do that thing. if u want smoothly. The problem is "東西"  yeah I know u want to say do not do that thing. but actually "thing is not = 东西" I will suggest u use those sentence.
    很重要，不要这样做
    很重要，不要做这种行为   do not use 东西 please use "行为"

    面试中，你得，跟兴趣和诚实，回答招聘人员的问题= When u interview, u have to honest and tell something about ur habit to HR. and answer the question that HR ask u.= 面试中，你需要诚实和说出你的兴趣，并且回答招聘人员的问题




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    喜剧。。。

    我最喜欢的电影是喜剧。 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(OK)
    事实上，除了漫画之外，观看任何其他类型的电影对我来说都是无聊的。 >>>>>>>>>(漫画=comics)

    In Chinese it  more like the book or Ebook about the B4 size.....u can  reference link  ( http://felipeinkueitan.pixnet.net/album/photo/72307382-%E7%8D%B5%E4%BA%BA%E6%BC%AB%E7%95%AB ) this is book style 

    This is  inside content is like this ( https://www.google.com.tw/search?biw=1687&bih=1258&tbm=isch&sa=1&ei=QYeoWvrNBYyV0gTkzrsQ&q=%E6%B5%B7%E8%B3%8A%E7%8E%8B%E6%BC%AB%E7%95%AB&oq=%E6%B5%B7%E8%B3%8A%E7%8E%8B%E6%BC%AB%E7%95%AB&gs_l=psy-ab.3..0l8j0i24k1l2.56568.61044.0.62071.16.13.0.0.0.0.1093.3332.5-1j2j1.4.0....0...1c.1j4.64.psy-ab..14.2.1488...0i7i30k1.0.acrLU4-FBR4#imgdii=NIiir-R4UaYi-M:&imgrc=1M6V7KCXUvayQM: ) 

    or u want to talk about the cartoon such as the Disney movies.  (that is called = 动画片 or 卡通) such those link
    http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0101414/
    http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2277860/

    so it depends on what u what to tell people.

    笑话是电影中最好的部分。>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(this part is almost ok but if u want to perfect I will add some word such below
    对白中笑话是电影最好的部分   对白=dialogue.  The conversation in movies     中=between. It is an Adv.

    所以，我不明白为什么有些人看悲伤电影。>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(it is ok but u can choice many way to say such as)

    所以，我不明白为什么有些人看悲伤的电影>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(悲伤 is ok but  悲伤的=sad   it is Adj. )

    所以，我不明白为什么有些人看悲伤的电影>>>>>>>>>>  This is Taiwanese and Hong Kong  style   in  TW or HK people most use 明白

    所以，我不理解为什么有些人看悲伤的电影>>>>>>>>>>  This is Chinese style (especially in Beijing ) In Chinese people use 理解


    it also depends on where u r.  Maybe u r in Hong Kong or maybe u r in China  I don't know

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    我是台灣人 我正想學粵語 想交換嗎?
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    March 13, 2018
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