- The correct answer is "much" You should use "many" for countable objects (like people, books, or hamburgers) and much for things that are not countable (like weight, the rate of something, light, grass, etcetera). Flow rates can hypothetically be any positive real number, not only whole numbers (integers), so the answer is "much."0 votedJuly 4, 20200
- 391 - Dealing with achesHere we go again... My left knee aches a lot, again! I'm aware that it's probably broken, since I've had issues of this nature for more than 5 years, but I don't want to have surgery. I mean, I can run and train like everyone else, but every one or two months I experience problems and pain. I'm used to it, although I know that I must face the problem before something worsens. I should stop going running, but I won't do it. It's the only physical activity I like to do, so <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">it won't be </s>some pain won't stop me, or will it <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">be</s>? Hahah. It's just a matter of time, so I should really start taking it seriously.0 votedJune 29, 20201
- <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">How we celebrated New year.</s> How We Celebrated New Years**The first letter of every word in a title should be capitalized.<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">We with my family </s>My family and I usually book a cozy house somewhere in nature, far away from the city. We prefer to celebrate <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">it</s> in a cute, quiet, and homely atmosphere. This year our house was <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">in</s> 200 km south of Moscow, near <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">the</s> a historic national park named Ugra. We spent <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">there</s> five days there<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> walking in the forest and along the <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">river Ugra</s> Ugra River, breathing fresh air, sitting by the fireplace in the evenings, and playing <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">the</s> board games.**Nicely written. I will copy and past another version with all corrections made below. The last sentence is a little bit long, so it may be better to break it up into multiple sentences.Corrected Version:How We Celebrated New YearsMy family and I usually book a cozy house somewhere in nature, far away from the city. We prefer to celebrate in a cute, quiet, and homely atmosphere. This year our house was 200 km south of Moscow, near a historic national park named Ugra. We spent five days there walking in the forest and along the Ugra River, breathing fresh air, sitting by the fireplace in the evenings, and playing board games.0 votedFebruary 2, 20201
Almost it's done my duties at college My duties in college are almost done
Only a few days to go to start enjoying vacation. There are only a few days to go before I can start enjoying my vacation. I'm finishing the my fourth semester, and it hasn't been easy at all. I should must have been mad to have decided taking nine subjects this semester. I must have been mad to decide to study nine subjects this semester. I really didn't pay enough attention to each one of them. Anyway, I learned a bunch of things about them. But, I have learned something important of from this: do'nt don't bite off more than you can chew. That´s That's what I did this semester, but next year, I'm pretty sure I won't do the same thing again lol. It was such a busy and tired tiring six months of school. I was supposed to control that situation, but other things happened throughout this period that it was made it impossible I could to catch up with other subjects. On of that things was that I was in a international competition about entrepreneurship, which it´s Hult Prize. Competing in an international entrepreneurship competition called the Hult prize was one of those things. My team was the winner in the stage called On Campus, but we weren't able to win the next one. In any case, we will continue preparering preparing to for next year. This project took me too much time, but I don't regret to have invested investing time in this because I learned a lot, and I liked like entrepreneurship related stuff. Now, I'm have such a great desire for vacation are so glad vacation is coming up soon.
Thank you for reading and correcting:)!0 votedDecember 3, 20181年轻人为什么睡觉睡得不好呢? 2018年5月10日
我经常听说年轻人睡觉睡得不好。具体地说,九零后的人睡觉睡得不太好。年轻人睡不着的原因是他们很晚的时候用手机。1990年以前出生的夜里很晚用手机的人可能比较少得多。研究说如果你很晚的时候用有屏幕的电器的话,睡着就很难。
科学家说大部分的人每晚需要至少睡八个小时的觉。他们也说如果你每晚不睡至少八个小时的觉的话,你可能会更容易生病。睡眠对我们的身体非常重要,尤其是我们的脑子。睡眠让我们的脑子休息。我们的脑子必须休息,否则我们就没有注意力。
如果你有睡不着觉的问题,最好不要躺在床上的时候用手机。我得承认我自己不采纳这个建议。我不但躺在床上的时候经常用我的手机,而且我睡觉的时间也常常短于八个小时。
0 votedMay 15, 20182What are your hobbies?
One of the my hobbies is reading books. I actually hated reading books when I was a student, because I didn't think I had have time to do so, I thought. But, I realized I was wrong. It was not that I did not have time but that I was wasting time. And Now I know how interesting books are now. When I was a college student, I started to read novels, and it was they were very interesting. Novels teach me a lot of things. For example, they teach me how to think of life or dealing how to deal with accidents. We can know many people's thinking as well from books. Books can also help us understand many other people's thoughts. I try to read various kinds of books, not only my favorite genres but also other genres like biographies documentary or something. My favorite writer is Dostoyevsky. He wrote the brothers Karamazov, which is my best favorite book. The story is a little difficult, but he make readers think about everything many things, like death and life life and death. Most of his novels don't say give exact answers in the books, and as he asks for us the answer. I like it. Unfortunately, I don't have not read books a lot much recently, but I try to read one book in a each week. Thank you.
Nicely done, keep up the good work! So, without the markings it should look something like this:
A couple more notes:
Usually, we use the word "documentary" to refer to a genre of films, not books.
Also, we usually say "life and death" instead of "death and life." Both are grammatical, but it is a sort of fixed expression.
0 votedMay 2, 20181What time do you usually get up? And why?
Yesterday, I decided to start getting up at 4 a.m. every morning, because I feel it's necessary for me to do so. Until yesterday, I thought I could study at night, but I couldn't do so everyday, and I don't know (the reason) why. The book I read yesterday said humans can concentrate on something for only 3 or 4 hours in a day, and it's only in the morning. Therefore, I couldn't do anything after working, even if I really wanted to do it [or: even if I really tried]. That's why I'm trying to get up early and go to bed early as well. Recently, I felt like I may not have high motivation to study English, because I felt I didn't concentrate on studying [or: "I did not feel that I concentrated on studying"]. When I think about it now, it's natural, because I was tired after working every night. Truth be told, I'm not sure whether I can sustain these routines or not. However, I believe in myself and will do my best. And now, I feel that I am in such good condition [or: much better condition] to study English. Maybe, I'm a natural morning person, and I think I can do it. I feel a lot of things about myself are changing. For example, I'm trying to clean my room even though I hate cleaning. This is good opportunity to change myself. Thank you!Note: Text in (parenthesis) is optional, so it can be deleted. Text in [brackets] is a suggestion for another way to word the phrase.
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