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- Technology phrases nous vivons dans un monde ou la technologie occupe une place tres importante dans notre vie beaucoup des gens diraient que la technologie est le meilleur moyen de communication seulement en cliquant avec ta souris la technologie met en danger notre vie privée nous ne devrions pas avoir peur de la technologieMarch 25, 202011
- Ma famille et moi Moi, je m'appelle eve. j'ai dix sept ans et mon anniversaire est le premier de juin . comme vous le voyez, j'ai les yeux bleus et les cheveux blondes. mes amis disent que je suis quel qu'un qui est bavarde est creative avec un bonne sense de l'humeur. Je pense que peut etre je suis un peu étrange mais c'est la vie. Comme tout le monde j'ai des qualités et des défauts. C'est vrai que je suis trés têtu et que j'ai des avis trés arretés mais sur le bon coté des choses je suis une amie loyal, quelqu'un qui est indépendent et pas trop sérieuse. Nous sommes cinq dans ma famille et je suis au mileu. Il ya moi, ma mere, mon pere, ma soeur et mon frere. Ma soeur s'appelle meg elle est plus agé comme moi et nous sommes tres proche. Elle est plus timide comme moi mais nous rigoles ensemble et je sais que je peut lui parler du tout. Maintenant elle va au college a galway et pendant le semaine elle me manque. Mon frere s'appelle finn et il est le cadette, pour le plus part je m'entends bien avec lui mais malheureusment nous ne sont pas tres proche. Pour quoi? Honnetement je ne suis pas certain, nous habitens ensemble il est un garcon et il a quinze ans et ca, c'est une catastrophe inéluctable. Mes parents, margaret et greg et moi sont tres proche, je les respect et ils me confiance. C'est vrai que j'ai beacoup de liberté mais je pense que c'est juste, je suis parfait. Ma mere est un professeur et nous sommes tres semblebles, peut etre un peut trop semblebles. Mon pere est plus comme ma soeur, il est intelligent est timide. Il est un ingenieur.March 19, 202030
- Oil warOil warThe oil war between Saudi Arabia and Russia, and what is their impact to the world.After the collapse in oil marketing in 2016 OPIC start to rely on other countries like Russia.They start to make a new alliance called OPIC+ which represented OPIC and Russia.This alliance agreed to decrease the production the oil until Mars 2020, when everyone think itcould be like a catholic married "if i can say that, because there is no divorce", but divorce happensin Mars 2020.The demand for oil in China is decreasing as a result of the Coronavirous and this reflects on the oil prices, as China typically consumes fourteen million barrels of oil a day a reduction in this demand lowers the price of oil by a thirdCurrently Saudi Arabia wants to keep reducing oil production but Russia is refusing to do that, because Russiarealised that reducing the production from the begging is a mistake that makes shale oilcompanies take from them their share in the oil market, and that is where a deadlock begun.Saudi Arabia says it can produce 13 million barrel of oil a day and can make a good offers toRussian customers like north west Europe , Asia and also the USA and it has counties with it like UAEthat can produce 4 million oil barrel a day (and there is Kuwait also.) ( Im not sure why the Kuwait bit is relevant?)The price per oil barrel is expected to reach 20 Dollars soon, and who can stand to the last? Saudi Arabia.relies on Oil had she have a war in Yemen, and have a many projects to 2030 vision, but Russiahave other resources to relay on like gun trading.Hi, any corrections made in red were things that were wrong, corrections in orange where places where your phrasing needed to be changed to make what you were saying clear, things written in purple are just little edits to make it sound more natural and Im so sorry, the bits i highlighted in yellow were places i wasn't sure what you meant0 votedMarch 18, 20201
- My Favorite SportsMy favorite sports are yoga and swimming. It was only in the last two years that I fell in love with sports .I firmly believed in "turtle regimen" before . Isn't the secret of the tortoise's longevity that it doesn't like to move?I fell in love with yoga because I unfortunately had a lumbar disease.The doctor advised me to do yoga to recover so from then on, I tried to practice yoga. Yoga not only makes my body recover, but also makes my body softer. It helps me to find inner peace in my busy life.I learned to swim because last year I fell down the stairs and broke my ankle. For the first time in my life, my leg was in plaster .I had to sit in a wheelchair and use double crutches. In order to recover as soon as possible, swimming became my good friend. continually swimming makes my body stronger and healthier.As the saying goes “A loss, no bad thing ”.The most interesting thing is that illness has changed my mind . Movement has become a part of my life. I'm lucky! Illness and accident are the gifts of life.When they are coming,you should accept them with smile on your face。Hi, this was a lovely little piece of writing to read, it was so optimistic! I just put in a couple of notes in purple showing how a native speaker would phrase it, and the correction in orange was a tense mistake but other than that it was perfect and I really enjoyed reading it0 votedMarch 18, 20201
- About Coronavirus in Northeast Brasil.The governor of my state decreed two weeks of stoppage even though we had no cases of COVID-19. People in my city are acting like we're all on a big holiday.It's so weird!This week my dad basically bought the whole supermarket (I don't know if it's clear that there is a deliberate exaggeration on my part). As in the supermarket, all the alcohols 70 (i dont know what alcohol 70 means here?) had run out, he called six pharmacies and found only one (do you mean he found only one open?). Anyway after all the panic buying, we have a lot of soap and alcohol. Now he wants to send all the family to the farm where my grandparents live.What is happening is very sad but I trust in the providence of Jesus Christ, everything will be fine. I'm praying for the rest of the world. <3Hi Lorena, your english is fantastic, I added the 'basically' to the line about your dad to make it super clear you're just exaggerating and a couple of other notes to make it flow more naturally but it all made perfect sense.The bits in purple are just to make it sound more like a native speaker and the orange was just a little verb mistake. If you want help expanding on any of it just let me know :)0 votedMarch 18, 20204
- Your place in the worldNot everything is abandonment or cowardice.Leaving, could be to take care yourself. Running away, could be protect yourself.Closing the door could be an act of self-love.Something was not spoken by you, but stayed inside your heart, it never died. Pay Attention!It can kill your dreams. Accumulated it creates dissatisfaction and sadness. So, speak!If your happiness depends on you staying quiet, something is wrong.Who is someone to you if you can't exchange ideas with them?Why do you depend on their presence that, in reality, is an absence?If they want distance, give it.if they don't like you any more, accept it.Those who like you, stay with you.It is not possible to be with someone who has built a wall around themself.This is so necessary that it doesn't matter little whether it is easy or not.If by necessity the person needs to leave you, let it go.Recognise your place in the world and your place in the lives of others.Hi, it's a nice piece i just put in some corrections to make it flow more naturally but i wasn't sure what you meant by the line I've highlighted?0 votedMarch 18, 20204
- Please, check my dialog-Hello, dear! How is your day?- Oh, dear, I`m very upset...-What happened?-It`s problem at my work. I had to spend all day making reports, our manager Kate felt sick and stayed at home so I had to take a lot of calls as well as advising people and making out orders. Then after all that my boss told me that my work wasn't good enough-What did your boss said exactly?-She said that I had spent too much time making reports and I should work quicker.-My dear, you shouldn't worry about it. You know you work hard and that you do your job well .-Yes, but i was very upset by what she said.-Maybe you should speak to her tomorrow.-I don`t think it's a good idea, she never changes her mind and I think it would just create more problems at work-okay, but dont be upset. You can go look for a new job. Everything will be fine!Hi its good dialogue, everything in purple was just changing things to make them sound more like a native speaker would talk, anything in red was wrong and orange needed to be rephrased to be clearer. well done0 votedMarch 18, 20201

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