Les cafes en Australiesont très différentes du France. Premiere, ils sont plus chère, mais je pense que la nourritures et le cafe est plus bien de France. J'aime beaucoup le deux mais je pense que ils ont trop différentes. Tu dois essayer le deux!

Report

The purpose of this report is summarizing the opinions which that our staff gave and suggesting possible improvements.
Recently we had a staff meeting in which we talked about our working conditions. Staff are happy with some company rules, especially the quality training lessons which are provided every quarter, as well as the regular performance appraisal; they said they always can learn new things from these events. However, they think there are still a number of aspects which we need to improve . Firstly, the more flexible working hours would produce more effective work. Secondly, some office areas has to have no air conditioner, its which is really annoying very disturbing in during summer and makes our staff can't unable to concentrate on working. The last point is about the annual leave days, it is a 12 day holiday which is 8 days less than similar companies in the industry. I would recommend to increase to 20 days from the new year.

In conclusion, our staff will like more would enjoy their job more and work more productive if we improve theose aspects they mentioned.

Great job! I assume this is a formal piece so maybe try to use a more formal tone? I edited some but it is quite informal language that is perhaps inappropriate for a work document. 

tofel:comprison writing

The article states that the science of archaelogy has gotten into trouble in the UK, however,the lecturer disagrees with it based on the new guide lines.
First of all, unlike the situation described in the passage, the archaeological examination in the site must be proceed before the constraction starts. If the archaeologists finds some valuable archaelogy interests here, there will be someone making a plan to preserve and document these precious stuff  items before the construction.
Second, according to the new guide lines, the exspenditure for the initial archaelogy examination and enactment of the plan would be paid by the construction company, so the relatively adequate financial support will allow the researcher do more a deeper investigation to discover more interesting information about our ancestors.
Lastly, there will be more paid positions available for the public in all stages of the archaeology process, including for initial examination, plan making and report writing. Thus, more and more people will be able to devote themselves into this career, and it will have a more promising furture.

Just watch your spacing after full stops and commas. Also watch your spelling.

Improving: Part 5

Here I go again. I'm sitting next to my bed thinking about what I can i write today. First of all, i hope i will not make a mistakes (it is very hard not to make mistakes! Don't worry!). It's annoying to make mistakes everyday and i imagine it's not easy for the other people to correct your a notebook full of mistakes. Well, i remember a friend who has always loved to help people through Italki. I think the mistakes made by the other people are a pleasure for him because it's an opportunity to help. I would like to not make so many mistakes even at the cost of the pleasure of people loving so much to help to help so much.

Thank you so much in advance!

Put all I's in capital letters, I stopped correcting after the first two.