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The purpose of this report is summarizing the opinions which our staff gave and suggesting possible improvements.
Recently we had a staff meeting in which we talked about our working condition. Staff are happy with some company rules, especially the quality training lessons are provided every quarter, as well as the regular performance appraisal, they said they always can learn new things from these events. However, they think there are still a number of aspects we need to improve , firstly, the more flexible working hours would product more effective work. Secondly, some office areas has to air conditioner, its really annoying in summer and make our staff cant concentrate on working. The last point is about the annual leave days, it is a 12 day holiday which is 8 days less than similar companies in the industry, I would recommend to increase to 20 days from the new year.
In conclusion, our staff will like more their job and work productive if we improve those aspects they mentioned.
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The purpose of this report is summarizing the opinions which that our staff gave and suggesting possible improvements.Recently we had a staff meeting in which we talked about our working conditions. Staff are happy with some company rules, especially the quality training lessons which are provided every quarter, as well as the regular performance appraisal; they said they always can learn new things from these events. However, they think there are still a number of aspects which we need to improve . Firstly, the more flexible working hours would produce more effective work. Secondly, some office areas has to have no air conditioner, its which is really annoying very disturbing in during summer and makes our staff can't unable to concentrate on working. The last point is about the annual leave days, it is a 12 day holiday which is 8 days less than similar companies in the industry. I would recommend to increase to 20 days from the new year.
In conclusion, our staff will like more would enjoy their job more and work more productive if we improve theose aspects they mentioned.
Great job! I assume this is a formal piece so maybe try to use a more formal tone? I edited some but it is quite informal language that is perhaps inappropriate for a work document.
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