An unforgettable day in my life is the day of the my marriage proposal of marriage. This That day my future fiance blinded blindfolded me so that I don’t didn't see nothing anything. I didn’t know where we were gonna go. He put me in the a cab and we were on in it for a few minutes before we stopped. We walked up stairs together and one second I heard our song. And understand I understood everything in this at that time. He take took off the scarf from my eyes and I looked around. I was on the stage of my favourite theatre. My boyfriend stands was right in front of me on one knee and asked me: Will you marry me?

Nice job - and congratulations! (Also, depending on how formal you want to be, "gonna" should be "going to")

Recently, I watched a movie called Wonder. In this movie there was a little boy called named Auggie whose face was destroyed by nature when he was burn burned. At first he study studied at home. Later, his mother send sent him to school, because he should accept receive normal education as like other children. Because of his terrible look, no one like liked to be friends with him. But his families family is was very kind. With help of teachers and classmates he finally he overcome overcame the challenges and have had a good time in school. It is obvious in this movie that every one have a has hard times in their life. We are not the only ones who feel pain in life.

Great job!