Review orf K-pop and memoryMemories

I like listening to American pop music (instead of Kpop) , but I was surprised (and glad) to see BTS, a Korean boy group, participate in the AMAs.

Just three months ago, I was a soldier in the Korean Aarmy.
We're were only had interested in the girl groups, Bbecause we are all maen.

but we saw a show of BTS with dancing and singing by BTS.

Honestly, we still weren't interested in the group, because the group is all boys!

We were only interested in girl groups, because we're all men, so when we saw BTS give a performance, we weren't particularly interested in the group, because the group is all guys!

But Even so, we're were charmed by their dancing and other attractive things.
So we stayed until the end of the show.

But even so, we were impressed by their dancing and other aspects of their performance, so we stayed until the end of the show.

And then I was discharged by the Army. but I want to see their show that attractive dancing and good voice.

Even after I was discharged from the Army, I still wanted to see them again, because of their excellent singing and dancing abilities.

After I was discharged from the Army.
I saw another of their show where BTS performed in the Ellen show.

I even saw a show where BTS performed in The Ellen Show. 

I was shocked because BTS took the photo with Marshmallow and Carmela who sang the Havana.

I was shocked because BTS took photos with Marshmallow and Camila Cabello, who sang Havana.

Recently, I saw a video which is broadcast by the Pew-Di-Pie.

Recently, I even saw a PewDiePie video that mentioned BTS.

The obvious thing is, such a world,
I must study English more than before.

Obviously, in this multicultural world, I guess I should study English even more than before!

I guess It is one of my motivation why I am studying English and other languages.

This is one of my motivations to study English, in addition to other languages.

Thank you !!