The 10.5 inch version <strike>iPad</strike> was released in June last year. <strike>and</strike> I was quite fascinated by its <strike>product</strike> launch and ever since <strike>then</strike>, I <strike>was</strike> aspired to (or simply wanted to / had to) buy one. However it was quite expensive <strike>for me</strike>, about/around 5500 yuan, and I didn't have enough money. <strike>Hopefully</strike> Luckily, I was doing an internship as a designer <strike>in</strike> at an internet company, so I decided to work hard and constrain (sounds a bit dramatic, I would've used reduce) my daily allowance <strike>saving some money for it</strike>. It took me about 3 months to <strike>accumulate</strike> save enough money and I finally bought <strike>one</strike> it in September last year .

The reason I bought such  an expensive item <strike>a costly stuff</strike> is because I was <strike>certainly</strike> attracted by its delicate design and diverse functions, and I also thought it could facilitate my studies or work (sounds too formal, I would've gone with "help me with my studies and work") at some point .

It's <strike>had been</strike> changed my life ever since I bought it. For me, the iPad is not just a recreational tool, but it's also <strike>a facilitator of</strike> an excellent tool for working and studying. It really helps me with my reading and design projects. With the iPad, I have built a habit of reading online articles for 40 minutes or so <strike>each day</strike> everyday. With a wide variety of apps installed on it, the iPad really adds some spice to my life and makes my life easier!

The mistakes made aren't a big deal. Well done and keep up the good work ;)

I am planning to improve my English writing skills by posting one notebook entry per day on italki. Italki is a great site/app/way to practice and correct your writing. But I feel I make many mistakes in every notebook. And this is not good. How hard can it be? (I feel like you meant to say "Why must it be so hard?")
I would like to thank all my friends from all over the world so much for correcting my notebook entries, I feel like I've learned a lot. But I still think my English grammar is not good enough to write about a topic perfectly. I think that I will chose/I'm thinking about choosing a course to improve my English grammar to fix it.
Tomorrow, I will call my friend and talk with him about this. He is a good guy and is also very good at English. He lived in America for 18 years and has just moved to Vietnam (if you specify "a couple of years ago" then you don't use just)
I will also read a topic in English everyday. It will provide me with a vast vocabulary for writing.

The only way to become better is to put yourself out there and make mistakes. No need to be ashamed. Good work

That's why it is called Introduction increases courage.

It's <strike>mere</strike> just a fable.