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^^ Correct me 1. Complete these sentences. That's OK if you made a mistake you need to admit it. 2. If your child is cranky you need to be strict , otherwise the child is going to be spoilt. 3. I suppose it'll be rain tommorow , so I suggest you to stay home. 4. I guess you offered to help her. 5. Can you arrange a party tommorow ? 6. I think it's a bitter product. No, that's sweet! 7. I need wide jeans. I don't like to wear narrow jeans. 8. Do you think it's an inexpensive smartphone ? 9. She's fancy, because she asked me a direct question. 10. She is intelligent, outgoing and adventurous.She will have a lot of advantages in the future. 11. This guy works a lot and likes get to know about computer sciences, so he's independent and hard-working.

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1. Complete these sentences. That's OK if you made a mistake you need to admit it. 

2. If your child is cranky you need to be strict, otherwise the child is going to be spoilt.
3. I suppose it'll be rainy tomorrow, so I suggest you to stay home.
4. I guess you offered to help her.
5. Can you arrange a party tomorrow? (Here it depends on what you want to say; this is correct if you want them to do the arranging tomorrow, but if you want the party to be tomorrow you should say "arrange a party for tomorrow")
6. I think it's a bitter product. No, that's sweet!
7. I need baggy jeans. I don't like wearing skinny jeans.*
8. Do you think it's an inexpensive smartphone?
9. She's fancy, because she asked me a direct question.
10. She is intelligent, outgoing and adventurous. She will have a lot of advantages in the future.
11. This guy works a lot and likes learning** about computer sciences, so he's independent and hard-working.

*what you said was grammatically perfect but we don't tend to call clothes wide or narrow so this sounds more natural. 

**the expression "to get to know" is more for when you're talking about a person and you want to know them better.

Your English is amazing by the way, congrats :)

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1. Complete these sentences. That's It's ok if you made a mistake you need to admit it.
2. If your child is cranky you need to be strict , otherwise the child is going to be spoilt.
3. I suppose it'll be rain it'll/it's going to rain tommorow, so I suggest you to stay at home.
4. I guess you offered to help her.
5. Can you arrange a party tommorow ?
6. I think it's a bitter product. No, that's sweet!
7. I need wide (in this case I would say "I need loose/loose fit jeans) jeans. I don't like to wear narrow slim jeans.
8. Do you think it's an inexpensive a cheap smartphone ?
9. She's fancy, because she asked me a direct question. (I don't think fancy is the word you were looking for)
10. She is intelligent, outgoing and adventurous. She will have a lot of advantages in the future (it's not wrong, but it doesn't sound nice. If you want to use the same word then you could say "she will be advantaged in the future" or even better "her future looks bright").
11. This guy works a lot and likes to get to know learn about computer sciences, so he's independent and hard-working.

Even though I seem to be a bit too strict I can assure you your english is good. You made a few minor mistakes but the meaning is clear, and that's the most important part of learning a language. Keep up the good work

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1.It's okay if you made a mistake, but you need to admit it.

2. If your child is cranky you need to be strict, otherwise the child is going to be spoilt. (A lot of people in America would use 'spoiled')
3. It might rain tomorrow, so I suggest that you stay at home.
4. I guess you offered to help her.
5. Can you arrange a party tomorrow?
6. "I think it's a terrible product." "No, it's sweet!" (I'm not quite sure what this was supposed to say.)
7. I need wide jeans. I don't like to wear narrow jeans. (This isn't incorrect, but most people would probably say 'skinny jeans'.)
8. Do you think this is an inexpensive smartphone?
9. She's fancy because she asked me a direct question. ('Fancy' might not be the best word to use here. Try using 'smart' instead.) 
10. She is intelligent, outgoing and adventurous. She will have a lot of advantages in the future.
11. This guy works a lot and likes learning about computer science, so he's independent and hard-working.

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