Hi there!

Now I am practicing to describe what I feel/imagine when I see a picture.

Following is about a picture of a woman standing beside a new shop.

Could anyone correct it? Thank you!

"A woman is standing beside a new shop. This is the opening day of her own shop. She has dreamt having her shop for a long time and so she had spent a lot of time to study things like owning a shop and operating it, hiring employees and what she should do to increase the sales.

Of course she worked really hard to earn money. Sometimes she went to another work at night after she finished her work in the evening.

She sometimes felt anxiety, especially she was exhausted. However at that time, she remembered what she was hoping."

i answered in comment box.....Arghhhh!!

"rather" is generally used when comparing 2 actions/ things. ex: I would rather play basketball than do homework. "reasonably" is mostly used to compare value/price. On the other hand is "reasonable" is used alone you could use it as good/ok in that scenario. ex: That toy is reasonably priced. That is a reasonable action. OR Yeah that's reasonable. (meaning that's good/ok)