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Descriptive practice Hi there!

Now I am practicing to describe what I feel/imagine when I see a picture.

Following is about a picture of a woman standing beside a new shop.

Could anyone correct it? Thank you!

"A woman is standing beside a new shop. This is the opening day of her own shop. She has dreamed to have her shop for a long time so that she has spent so much time to study many things - how to have own shop and operate it, how to hire new employees and what she should do to increase the sales.

Of course she has worked really hard to earn money. Sometimes she went to another work at night after she finished her work in the evening.

She felt sometimes anxiety especially she was exhausted. However in case of such a time, she remembered what she was hoping."

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Hi there!

Now I am practicing to describe what I feel/imagine when I see a picture.

Following is about a picture of a woman standing beside a new shop.

Could anyone correct it? Thank you!

"A woman is standing beside a new shop. This is the opening day of her own shop. She has dreamt having her shop for a long time and so she had spent a lot of time to study things like owning a shop and operating it, hiring employees and what she should do to increase the sales.

Of course she worked really hard to earn money. Sometimes she went to another work at night after she finished her work in the evening.

She sometimes felt anxiety, especially she was exhausted. However at that time, she remembered what she was hoping."

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