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My Day
Hello everyone!
My name is Bruno Estevan. Today I woke up later than usual and took my breakfast. I only ate cake. My wife and I spoke a little. She did her makeup in the afternoon. Now, I'm alone at home using italki and training a new language. What do you think?
Thank you for reading!0 votedJanuary 13, 20180It was a threatening night. The wind blew drastically and the storm made terrifying sounds. All of a sudden, a rock on the cliff was hit by thunder and broke into several pieces. The pieces fell to the ground and hit the house located underneath the cliff. The house was left destroyed. The concrete inside was revealed and the poles, walls, and windows were down. We can see that it's totally ruined. The farmer, the owner of the house, had no place to stay.
To see the place he dedicated his life to is destroyed left him heartbroken. He had no choice but to stand up again and move on with life. Because his home fell into ruin he had to rebuild it. He needed to collect some bricks in town and hire people to help him get the work done. Also, he had to rent a truck to clean up the debris. Since the place was too dangerous to live in, he sought for a new field to start life all over again. He had to apply for a government permit to build the house legally.
As forbidding as the future may seem, the farmer had to cheer up and look at the bright side of things.
0 votedJanuary 13, 20181Eiken writing, could you check my sentences?
Do you think that Japanese companies need to improve their treatment of female workers?
I think that women who work for Japanese companies need to be treated better. I have several reasons to support my idea.
First of all, a lot of women raise their children alone recently. So they make more money to take care of their children by working.
Second, women are now seen to be weaker (in terms of ability) than men. But there is no difference about capacity to deal with the problem. (This sentence is not clear. Rephrase it)
Third, considering the success of these companies, they need to listen to the opinions of female workers. That's because women have a different perspective compared to men.
In conclusion, some people think that Japanese companies don't need to improve the position of female workers. But, I think that they need to improve that of them. (Not clear. Please rephrase.)0 votedJanuary 12, 20181- Entry # 1 Today, the weather is perfect for relaxation so I spent most of my time sleeping. I woke up 6 am and took my breakfast. Mom and I had a little chit chat about the usual things. After that, I went back to my room and slept with my partner. He arrived home at 6 am since he spent the whole night playing video games with his friends at the internet cafe. He woke me up when he arrived (it's a habit he can't get rid of) and told me all the nice things a husband can tell his wife. Sometimes it bothers me since I don't like being disturbed when sleeping. But I realized that there's no valid reason to be sour in the morning, especially when he only has good intentions. Anyway, after all that, I went back to sleep and woke up 12 noon; I ate my lunch; and drank my iced coco at the terrace. It's such a calm day. The weather is still as beautiful as it was at 6 am. I think I'll go back to sleep again.
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