Please help my writing practice:))

Seeing his place which he dedicated all his life to, he was heartbroken. He had no chance but stand hp again to live out his life. Because his home was turned into a disaster, he had to build his home. He would need to collect some bricks in town and hire some labors to help him get the work done. Also, he had to rent a truck to carry all these mess and a digger to clean up. Since the place was too dangerous to live, he had to seek for a new field for him to start off his life. He had to apply for the permit from govermrnt so that he could builde the house legally.

As forbidding as the future may seem, the farmer had to cheer up and see through the bright side.

"Thunder" is the noise that lightning makes. We would say, "the rock was hit by a bolt of lightning."

Very nice writing! 

Hi Ryan!  Well done, you've written a lovely piece about a very bad storm!

A few comments: The word threatening doesn't quite fit below - it might be better to say 'It was a terrible night' or 'It was a disastrous night'.  Likewise, we wouldn't normally describe the wind as blowing 'drastically' - an option is to say the wind blew 'ferociously'.  This would mean that the wind was very strong and fierce.  I've corrected a few other errors below.  I hope this helps!

All the best with your English language learning!

Becky : )

Seeing his place which he dedicated all his life to, he was heartbroken. He had no chance but stand up again to live out his life. Because his home was turned into a disaster, he had to build his home. He would need to collect some bricks in town and hire some labors to help him get the work done. Also, he had to rent a truck to carry all these mess and a digger to clean up. Since the place was too dangerous to live, he had to seek look for a new field for him to start off his life. He had to apply for the permit from the government so that he could build the house legally.

As forbidding as the future may seem, the farmer had to cheer up and see through the bright side.

It was a threatening night. The wind blew drastically and the storm made terrifying sounds. All of a sudden, a rock on the cliff was hit by thunder and broke into several pieces. The pieces fell to the ground and hit the house located underneath the cliff. The house was left destroyed. The concrete inside was revealed and the poles, walls, and windows were down. We can see that it's totally ruined. The farmer, the owner of the house, had no place to stay.

To see the place he dedicated his life to is destroyed left him heartbroken. He had no choice but to stand up again and move on with life. Because his home fell into ruin he had to rebuild it. He needed to collect some bricks in town and hire people to help him get the work done. Also, he had to rent a truck to clean up the debris. Since the place was too dangerous to live in, he sought for a new field to start life all over again. He had to apply for a government permit to build the house legally.

As forbidding as the future may seem, the farmer had to cheer up and look at the bright side of things.