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Try this Carlos, your English is excellent and these changes are minor. English business language is more direct and less formal these days. Please feel free to change it to reflect you own style. My changes are underlined. And please ask me any questions if you have them.
Cecile Cloutier
Hey guys! I need some help with this:
Hey there! I just wrote this but I'm not very sure that it's completely ok. Could you please help me?
Dear Mrs. Damm
My name is Carlos Navarro and I am a senior student in the undergraduate Biology program at Universidad Simón Bolívar in Caracas, Venezuela. My university program requires I complete a trainee or internship program in order to complete my studies. Therefore, I’m actively searching for opportunities abroad. I have heard my university has exchange agreements with Uppsala Unviersitet and I know of two fellow Biology that are currently participitating in research groups at Uppsala. I am very interested in being part of a research project at Uppsala, and would welcome a chance to discuss further opportunities for research study. My contact information is listed below, and I thank you in advance.Sincerely
Carlos Navarro
Laboratory of Nutritional Assesment
Universidad Simón Bolívar, Venezuela.Telephone number
Email address
Thank you in advance guys!0 votedJanuary 27, 20182

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