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Hey guys! I need some help with this: Hey there! I just wrote this but I'm not very sure that it's completely ok. Could you please help me? Dear Mrs. Damm My name is Carlos Navarro and I am a senior student of the Biology Degree at Universidad Simón Bolívar in Caracas, Venezuela. Since, as an undergraduate student, my university demands me to complete a trainee or internship program in order to complete my studies, I’m actively searching for opportunities abroad, and I have been informed that my university has some exchange agreements with Uppsala Unviersitet. In fact, I know about two Biology students from my university that, I think, are currently part of some research groups in Uppsala. I am very interested in knowing if there is, at leats, a mínimum posibility for me to get in contact with you since I am very interested in being part of a research project in your renowned house of study. Yours, sincerely Carlos Navarro Laboratory of Nutritional Assesment Universidad Simón Bolívar, Venezuela. Thank you in advance guys!

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Try this Carlos, your English is excellent and these changes are minor. English business language is more direct and less formal these days. Please feel free to change it to reflect you own style. My changes are underlined. And please ask me any questions if you have them.

Cecile Cloutier

 

Hey guys! I need some help with this:

Hey there! I just wrote this but I'm not very sure that it's completely ok. Could you please help me?

Dear Mrs. Damm
My name is Carlos Navarro and I am a senior student in the undergraduate Biology program at Universidad Simón Bolívar in Caracas, Venezuela. My university program  requires  I complete a trainee or internship program in order to complete my studies. Therefore, I’m actively searching for opportunities abroad. I have heard my university has exchange agreements with Uppsala Unviersitet and I know of two fellow Biology that are currently participitating in research groups at Uppsala. I am very interested in being part of a research project at Uppsala, and would welcome a chance to discuss further opportunities for research study.  My contact information is listed below, and I thank you in advance.

Sincerely

Carlos Navarro
Laboratory of Nutritional Assesment
Universidad Simón Bolívar, Venezuela.

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Thank you in advance guys!

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