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I'd like to talk about my favorite movie it's (fargo)
It is about person who works for an automobile company and he is the general manager , he is married with a beautiful woman and he has an 8 years old child , he prepared his feasibility study about his dream business so he went to his father-in- law and presented it in the front of him but he refused and he told him that money doesn't grow on trees an he has to  depend on himself and to take responsibility of himself.He got a deal with 2 criminals and they agreed there will be no blood in this plan .
They burgled the house , kidnapped his wife and they hurt the child.They (who?) drove their car heading to the safe place. once The sheriff stopped the car and he charged them about reckless driving , they were quite insane , the weirdo killed the sheriff . The car passed right them and saw the murder , the 2 criminals followed them and they killed them too.