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Dear President,
I am a senior from this school. I am writing for the purpose of providing several suggestions on how to improve students' physical condition.
Compared with the past, lots of students are losing their advantage of healthy bod<font style="background-color: yellow;">ies</font>, since they spend most of their time <font style="background-color: yellow;">indoors and online</font>. Thus, it is necessary for school to take some measures which can enhance their <font style="background-color: yellow;">physical</font> condition. <font style="background-color: yellow;">First</font>, more activities about sports can be held to arouse their enthusiasm <font style="background-color: yellow;">for</font> body building. In addition, it is advisable to update the physical exercise <font style="background-color: yellow;">equipment</font> which will enable students go outside to <font style="background-color: yellow;">do </font>sport<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font> more conveniently.
I sincerely hope you <font style="background-color: yellow;">will adopt</font> my advice. Students, with you<font style="background-color: yellow;">r</font> help, will have more chances to improve their <font style="background-color: yellow;">physical</font> condition.
Yours truly,
Li Lei0 votedNovember 12, 20182Nowadays, scary movies enjoy enormous popularity. It’s not surprising that we can find diverse movie posters designed to frighten when we go to the cinema. Those scary movies do attract a lot of people, and there are several reasons for this phenomenon.
First and foremost, from a physiological perspective, people may owe their love for scary movies to the ‘excitation transfer process ‘. According to the research, watching a scary movie would increase subject‘s heart rate, blood pressure and respiration. Moreover, it would exert a lasting effect on those who watch it, that is, the feelings they get in other incidents after their watching, be it positive or negative, will be intensified without being aware of the reason. Consequently, happiness doubled, people who encounter something enjoyable at that specific time are inclined to be satisfied with the scary movie watched before and ache for more. Besides, some people love scary movies for the reason that they have different predispositions—— they are simply fond of high levels of physiological excitement.
Additionally, to some people, what makes a scary movie so fascinating is its novelty. They find it fantastic to watch the visual effects of various bloody scenes divergent to what they experience every day, which could probably help them escape the repetitious and tiresome daily routine.
Last but not least, gender socialization plays a part in a man or a woman’s attitude towards scary movies. From letting others know that he enjoys a scary movie abundant with frightening scenes that someone else would probably not, a man might believe that he can give others an impression that he is brave if not sexually attractive.
Personally, I seldom take pleasure in scary movies. What determines whether a movie attracts me is how elaborate its story is constructed, rather than how impressive its visual effects are. In other words, I simply enjoy the process of solving those veiled mysteries while the story has a strict underlying logic. However, in this era of overwhelming demand for economic profits leading to the commercialization of the movie industry, the market has been glutted with the movies, especially the so-called scary movies, pursuing flashy appearance but crudely made without innovations. That’s the main reason why most of the scary movies scarcely appeal to me.非常好! 比多加拿大人们好!
0 votedNovember 12, 20181Education
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without an education is unfortunate in the modern wor<font style="background-color: yellow;">l</font>d.Fortunately I <font style="background-color: yellow;"> have received </font>a good education in China.
I want to be a fashion d<font style="background-color: yellow;">e</font>signer or stylist after graduation. <font style="background-color: yellow;">Somebody said </font>“It's very difficult for this year's graduates”.
I will try my best.
0 votedNovember 12, 20181- 普通话的句子 - 谢谢帮我! 我们谈话 We talk 我们谈话吧 Let's talk 我喜欢网球,更喜欢篮球. I like basketball more than I like tennis. 我很高,王老师更高. I am tall, Teacher Wang is even taller. 我更喜欢中国菜. I like Chinese food even more. 离考试还有两个多月. It is more than two months until the test. 离办公室5公里 It is 5km to the office 离下课还有十分钟. It is ten minutes until the end of class.November 12, 201831
I went to an English interview.
"I did not use contrations in this story because my keyboard is not working"
Today I went to an English interview to work at a call center. At first when I <font style="background-color: yellow;"> got </font>to the interview, I was so <font style="background-color: yellow;">nervous</font> because I do not have experience doing this kind of work, but I am <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> fast learner. Well, I had to do three English tests with <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> time limit on the computer, <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>and </strike></font>speak on <font style="background-color: yellow;">the </font>phone<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> and help some customers<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">A</font>lso I did a general English test about my <font style="background-color: yellow;">knowledge</font> and my writing <font style="background-color: yellow;">ability</font>. When I finished the tests and the recruiter told me about my results, I felt surprised, but he told me "you passed the intermediate<font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font>level, but you have to do another test in advanced English.<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">"</font>0 votedOctober 5, 20181The sentence as written is not correct. As you suspect, you cannot use both in one sentence.:
To say it correctly, you could use either of the following:
1. "Although you are right, the problem could be solved by teacher's help."
2. "You are right. Nevertheless, the problem could be solved by teacher's help."<sub></sub><sup></sup><strike></strike>0 votedOctober 5, 20180- Немного о выходных Сегодня пятый Октября две тысячи восемнадцатого года. В понедельник восьмого октября будет праздник - День Благодарения. В этих выходных, большинство канадцев будем есть слишком много еды со семьями. Завтра я зайду к тёте, в воскресенье к маме, и в понедельник к другой тёте. Обычно мы едим индейки, ветчину, картошки, тыкву, и много десертых. Поэтому я уже сделал моё русское домашнее задание. Я практиковал родительный падеж и также читал стихи Анны Ахматовы : «Тихо льётся тихий Дон...» - очень печальные стихи. До стихыми Ахматовы, мы прочитали стихи Лермонтова - Парус. Сегодня вечером, мы с девушкой зайдем в кино посмотреть документальный фильм об альпинизме. Говорят в Калифорнии есть большая скала слишком опасная подняться. Но по-любому эти парни хотели пытаться. Я не прочитал много об этом фильме, поэтому не знаю жили ли они. Я думаю что они наверно жили потому-что если бы они умерли, кто бы сделали этот фильм?October 5, 201891
Drawing Class
In this class, the professor taught us about setting up our drawing position, such as setting the easel and the board, orienting the board, putting the object we will draw in the most comfortable place, using the tape to regulate the view of drawing, adjusting the distance between the <font style="background-color: yellow;">artist <strike>drawer</strike> </font>and the paper ...etc.
After all of the students had set up, the professor gave us a practice which requires all of the students to draw <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">the </font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">our</font> partner without<font style="background-color: yellow;"> <strike>watching </strike>looking at</font> our own drawing paper. In the beginning, we were all <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>worry</strike> worried</font> about how bad the drawing would be. After a while, we focused on the things <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>what</strike> that the </font>professor originally wants us to do -- keep our hands drawing with what our brains think, keep our brains drawing with what our hands do.
In the first section, I have no idea what I'm drawing when I draw without watching the paper and <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>leaving</strike> removing</font> the pencil from the paper. On the drawing paper, the eyes are the most recognizable part because I drew the eyes first and then other parts of the face. I couldn't even figure out where I was drawing in the end.
In the second section, I was allowed to draw with a glimpse of paper. It looks better <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>to compare</strike> compared </font>to the other practice in terms of <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>recognizable</strike> recognition</font>, yet it might not be so good because I started to pay attention to the relative position and not focus on the eye-brain-cooperation.
I feel so lucky to study at this university, it offers all students an art studio building that we can go to practice at any time! I will share what I experience in the drawing class and how they teach drawing!0 votedSeptember 2, 20181One more way to learn English!
I was looking for methods of learning English, when I found an interesting idea.
A speaker on a video said that thinking in English is a very important part of study!
As we know, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">being in an</font> English-speaking area is the best thing to learn English. It may be <strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">an </font></strike>to travel abroad or just to try to surround yourself <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">with</font> 'English' things: books, tv shows, newspaper, sit<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">e</font>s <strike>i</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">on</font> the Internet and so on. And <strike>in the the second way </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> second, </font>you need to think in English! It's going to be very helpful in your English skills!
Of course, <strike>at the first time</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">at first</font> it will be difficult. You need to do it every time, when you can. You can start with simple words: where is my family now? - At the swimming pool! What am I eating now? - Potato!
Then you will be able to make simple sentences: I'm going to walk with my friends this evening. My aunt cooks very yummy cakes!
Pretend that you <strike>on the </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">are doing an</font> interview or think in English about many situations in you life, when you're in bed, ready to sleep :) Btw, when I was thinking in English in my bed, I had a dream, where I was speaking in English , it was funny :D
There are so many ways to start to think in English right now!
Good Luck!!!
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Thank you for your attention!
Please don't be shy to correct me, if you're a native speaker.
Thank you for your correction!
And I'd like to know either my mistakes were really bad mistakes or your corrections were just an another way to say the same sentences better?
And please, tell me your opinion about my English skills.
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Very good!!</font>
THANKS ❤0 votedAugust 24, 20181
